An ordinary tickle fight between Dreamy Daze and Princess Celestia gets more intense when the loser has to be the winner's tickle pet for a week. A fierce battle ensues, and after a lot of laughs, Celestia ends up victorious. Until Dreamy accuses the princess of cheating due to her being naturally bigger than he is, and demands a rematch.
Wanting to entertain the grumpy pegasus, Celestia obliges, taking on a shorter pegasus form in the interest of fairness.
Will Dreamy be able to prevail when the odds and the princess are no longer stacked?
Story contains: Consenseual tickle fights, foot fetish, wingplay, self indulgence, OC x Canon, read the comics
Chapters (1)
Interesting fiction!
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Thanks!
I'd love to see that scenario of dreamy hiding under the table teasing Celestia during meetings.
Decent tickle fic. The action was fast-paced and easy to follow, which kept it from being a slog, even at 7k words. Good job of keeping the power dynamic mostly balanced for the sake of suspense. Would have preferred a different ending, but that's just me.
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Thanks! Honestly I'm surprised it hit 7k words. I had this pinned for like a quick 4k thing. Goes to show what passion can do.
I did think of doing an alt ending where Dreamy actually wins round 2, but I think his cockiness getting punished just works better narratively.