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Flora Blossom #1 · Nov 9th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Oooof

eat your heart out

... best line!!!

“Please!” I beg, my hooves weakly scrabbling on its formless frame. “F-for us both! f they see me—if they see us~!”

you enter gap between ^ and the bottom line.

A lump of the Smooze raised up, almost like a cocked eyebrow. But finally, it accepts my request, the tentacles lowering to me the ground next to the cot before retracting.

Also good fiction as usual!!!

Vis-a-Viscera #2 · Nov 9th, 2022 · 2 · ·

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Right, fixed those flaws. Thanks for looking you as always!

Alzrius

Alzrius #3 · Nov 9th, 2022 · 4 · ·

For those who want to see the full cover pic, check out 2007058 on Derpi.

tsaukpaetra #4 · Nov 11th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Heh, but Discord isn't technically the "master" of Shmooze...
Convenient little lie about them surveillance equipment. You know they were still totally functional! 😈

Robipony

Robipony #5 · Dec 9th, 2022 · · ·

This certainly was an interesting piece. I kind of like Redheart x Smooze, certainly wouldn't mind seeing more.

Vis-a-Viscera #6 · Dec 9th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Hmm... I may just decide to continue on the tales of just what debauchery year-one Redheart gets into behind the scenes.

FOXTrot2

FOXTrot2 #7 · Apr 16th, 2023 · · ·

Apparently… I’m ready to handle this mysterious medical emergency.

Apparently.

Well, the patient in this wrecked room is not Nightmare Moon.

Thank you for that astute observation

Besides, the statue was a city away, under Celestia’s eternal eye. No way in Tartarus is Discord coming back in my lifetime.

Clearly nobody has told her about "Jinxing"

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