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PegPony
I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.
PegPony
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Wow what a wholesome "family friendly" story!
First thought:
"Not sure if Appledad is a zombie or a ghost // and at this point I'm afraid to ask."
Second thought:
"Upload Appledad's consciousness to Sweetie Bot, then spend fifteen thousand words of dark magic and darker science trying to get her a functioning 'package'."
The fluttershy thing was something..
Dear Celestia, where to begin...
Okay, Twilight's story was hot, and I mean Hawt! But going through the rest of the Mane 6, well, it was sort of rushed. I do enjoy fapping to some BowDash, but tbh, I got rather turned off by Dom Flutters with her dad. The Apple thing, well, I rather not too surprised with Applebloom Futa. Pinkie and Igneous, I have read a few of those. Rarity, as I would imagine for her R63 counterpart, Elusive, would be gay as an eight-bit coin...
All in all, save some minor things, a nice bit of imagination. Too bad that Spike doesn't have any mother or sister, but he could always get some from Ember, or Smolder, just to rub it in with Garble...
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Thank you for your constructive criticism! Unfortunately there's nothing I can do about personal taste but I realise that some of my stories can seem rushed, thank you for enjoying my story :)