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I'm sure if the nobles acted nice they would be treated nice. From what I've seen and heard about them if their noses were any higher they could touch the moon. Personally I still think Celestia would be a good choice. Not only does it expose her to many people but also politics and the things she might need to know considering changelings don't show themselves to others so the lessons her mom left probably aren't what another ruler in the world eye would have to use.
Nice work like the rest. My only criticism is more the advice of looking into finding someone to proof read for you. There were more than a few grammar/spelling mistakes. I also noticed it throughout the other chapters. If nothing else, I'd suggest re-reading through the chapter to double check before posting it from now on.
What do you mean by that?
I see, I have missed a lot of comment sorry about that, private things have been shit. So I will try to answer as many I can now.
Well I'm really bad at sex joke, it would only be like "that's what she said, or something like that"
sex(not decide, but aleast sexuall preference) = their might be hints that the characters have had sex or are going to have it (this is what's not decided). But there will always talk about preference, like does she like mare/girls or stallions/boys, might be both and so on. The drafts are still low on content of such things. Hope this will gives you an answer your looking for.
Yeah, still looking for a proof reader, I have been speaking with my friend about looking through my chapters. But no luck, sorry once again for the mistakes in the chapter.
One of the reasons they don't want Celestia to take in Tec is the noble will throw a fit. and yeah your right about the nobles as I quote yourself
they're stiff and set in their old way, just because their families where there when Celestia move the capital to Canterlot.
Thanks you all for reading and commenting. I don't know when the next chapter will be out, as I have some stuff in private that's need taking care off. I hope you all don't wait to long. Thanks again.
Are they going to turned her into child soilder?
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Nah, I have look up info on changelings from rpg books and sites, in some of them I found that some insect like changeling can sense other changeling by sensing their magic or smell. So I was thinking that ESS will use Tec to figure out other changelings.
Odd, if there are infiltrators present why do the awkward dance to have her attacked?
I’m glad those three getting into a closed off training area was addressed.
I think Blue could benefit from having a sibling! Sucks about those whining nobles.
Why does MC want to be a sell-sword? What about rebuilding her hive and making some secret allies for Equestria?