Mermaid Girls of Flora Da (The Dazzlings Run a Tourist Trap)

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While vacationing in sunny Flora Da, Sunset and Twilight discover the Dazzlings' latest scheme...targeting tourists?

Cover image is based on artwork by jonfawkes, used by artist's permission. Go look at the original, it's better than this edit.

Is this story really poly enough to have a chance in the Sunset Shimmer x Polyship Contest (January 5th 2023 to February 2nd)? I guess we'll see...

[Excerpt from that contest's rules thread:]
[Q:] I have a question. Are love triangles allowed?
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[A:] I think that’s perfectly acceptable

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Revel Montaro

Revel Montaro #1 · Jan 26th, 2023 · 2 · ·

*snerk* cute. And basments in Florida are rare. Sea world Orlando has a dolphin window like this but it's built into the hill so kind of a cheat for underground.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #2 · Jan 26th, 2023 · · ·

I want to hold hands with you, more than I want to hold hands with anyone else in the whole world.

Painfully adorable.

Also, nice to see the Dazzlings have found a niche... though keeping an eye on them might still be advisable, just in case they try to take over the state or something.

The Voice in the Water

The Voice in the Water #3 · Jan 26th, 2023 · · ·

That was cute and silly. Thanks for the funny little bit of fluff.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #4 · Jan 26th, 2023 · · ·

Twilight touched Sunset's arm. "But in Flora Da, basements are really rare! This might be the only basement within a hundred miles of here! It's because the water table is so high. This basement must be really well sealed against leaks!"

She's got a point.

"Yes. She's too stupid to be good at evil."

That I can agree with.

Meanwhile, Adagio and Aria flirted with more audience members, seeming to enjoy the bickering. A woman grabbed the man she'd come to the show with, and dragged him out by the arm. Several other people left too, squabbling and complaining as they went.

Not surprised that happened.

"I WORK here, my MOST DETERMINED PRACTICALLY A CROSS-COUNTRY STALKER. Me and the other two Dazzlings own this building. Maybe the question should be, why are YOU still here? You haven't even bought another ticket."