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So this is totally based on a story by Rated Ponystar. Just from the description alone. Even if it's not a copy-paste at least.
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It's a damn good story by that author. I will borrow ideas but never steal work and just copy paste. That's fucked up.
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call it inspiration.
I don’t know much about the law, but can’t caramel sue for that?
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That’s pretty interesting. Fanfics have a lot of ideas and concepts that can be used.
This was so bittersweet.
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That’s another word for it.
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Most definitely. The first hit could be potentially justified because he wasn't going to his house, but the hits after were definitely illegal.
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Ok cool. Wanted to make sure.
Trollestia is here.
That’s actually an interesting concept. Someone with a guilt complex reaction to the murder.
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I'm glad you recognized the guilt reaction. Its coming from personal feelings and experiences and I figured at least a few of her friends would feel that way.
... how odd a blue pegasus that looks familiar (not suggesting it's rainbow)
I wouldn’t say gross. More of new.
Is that really twilight?
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When i wrote that about Twilight talking to Minuette, I originally planned it to be Minuette imaging it. And then I changed my mind Twilight being able to visit her friends that way. Now I'm leaning towards leaving it to readers discretion, but in my mind it's really Twilight talking to her.
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Oh ok
How many people would actually believe that? Some of these are believable, but the black eye thing seems shady. Also, all this happening to one pony back to back?
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I would I guess. All the others are too busy dealing with the aftermath so guards assaulting someone would probably slip through the cracks
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If that excuse was used I would believe it.
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Considering how dumb some of them can be tho
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I wouldn’t say they’re dumb. More of oblivious.
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Eh that's fair
I’m pretty sure any cursed person would’ve gotten help.
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She's not actually cursed. It's just what she thinks.
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I know, but still. Anyone who thinks they were cursed would probably call someone to get rid of it.
Wait haven't any of them seen Twilight in heaven
I’m going to wait to see where this goes, I’m kinda curious, I’d love to see a chapter with Caramel, it seemed like he took Twilights Reforms personally… while I have no doubt the author took inspiration from another story I don’t feel that’s necessarily a bad thing. Just look at the Negotiations-Verse, the noncanon entry’s are fascinating and offer different views and ideas.
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I didn't actually plan on one for Caramel but that's a good idea. It'll be the final chapter. Working on Lyras rn
Does Twilight die in this story or not? Or this this just something that I just need to read about to find out?
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Just gotta wait and see. 😛
Yeah some royal guard, maybe instead of having your friends hire them and I don’t know have some actual former military or security personnel and some from the military like oh I don’t know your brother twilight instead of your two friends who don’t know nothing about royal guards and training. And just b/c rainbows in the wonderbolts doesn’t mean she qualifies as an instructor to train them.
Plus while twilight was in canterlot did these morons or any of them go along with twilight to provide security for her in case something happens. Oh wait they probably did b/c if freaking equstria and the only guards I would trust with my life are the lunar guards since they actually understand the meaning of security and what to actually do.
*meanwhile*
So twilight I have a few questions for you
Wait so spike would have had another mother.
Oh my dear Luna this, this is sad
Did they adopt scootaloo?!!!
Yeah I’m betting twinkle shine was also involved with twilight death just so she could have minttue all to herself
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Yes
Ack , my heart it hurts.
But Luna and celestia I will never forget about you too I still have there pictures
So are we ever going to find out what twilight was thinking… actually now that I think about it she probably set this whole thing up.
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That's a good guess but I'll explain it in Twinkleshines chapter
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Gotcha.
But my theory still stands that that’s actually the human twilight aka sci twi and the real twilight is on the other side.
.....I did not see that one coming. When I read this I figured Twinkleshine knew something about the guard involved but I figured it was like her brother it being her father....that's just....wow, poor Twinkleshine
.... well damn now we now who and that they didn’t last long after
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Agreed
Dang, that’s just dang. But still it’s the guards faults all along.
And I was fucking right and called it it’s the guards fault that’s twilight dead in the first place maybe, they should be. reliving the guards of there duty’s for fucking up big time.
Again worse guards and military ever
I always did wonder if that's how immortal beings die
Ach my emotions.
And now I’m crying that twi doesn’t get to see there child.
Scootaloo got adopted? Doesn’t she already have guardians?
I don’t know about that. Sometimes there’s a thin line between justice and revenge. I kind of starting to wonder which one this is.
That’s very sweet.
So sweet
This is kind of what I talked about in one of the previous chapters.
That’s very interesting.
When what went too far.
That’s bittersweet.
She’s not wrong, but that argument goes out the window when it affects others.
That is amazing.
I want that happen so bad.