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It is said that in times of danger, heroes will come together to face the rising tide of evil, and fight back to preserve the light. These heroes can come from the strangest of places.
This is the story of one such hero. Although she appears to be Queen Haven, you may be surprised to learn her true origins...
Part of the Rebirth of Magic continuity. Tags will be updated as the story continues.
Written as part of 40 Years of My Little Pony.
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Ok wasn't expecting this
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I like throwing curveballs in my writing.
This is interesting and… I like it!!!!
Okay. I admit that I was only HALF-expecting this from the bits of foreshadowing in "Misty's" story , but I still appreciate the effort going into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. I appreciate the little peek at things before this guy ended up becoming Haven. And, yeah, that means all three of the Royal Pegasi are transformed humans (even if Pipp's story won't be shown until next month).
Certainly looking forward to more of this.
nice chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter
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Thanks.
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Glad you liked it. This story is actually part of a larger series called Rebirth of Magic. I can send an invite to the group if you'd like.
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That they are. This gives the story plenty of opportunity for dramatic irony. Besides, what with all the stuff surrounding the new King in Britain this seemed like too good an opportunity to pass up.
Still hard to believe a crystal caused all of this!
Oh boy!
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1. Magical artefacts can have strange and wonderful properties.
2. Stuck in ponyworld with no apparent way to get back... and absolutely no clue what she's doing.
Heh... couldn't resist saying that, eh? :3
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I couldn't find any (apart from a weird soda can one).
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Good news! Jimmy's entry in the series is here!
- MLP Gen 5
- Adventure
- Comedy
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Yeah I saw that soda can one.
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Thanks very much. I already responded to that, but still appreciate the message. :-D
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Weird, eh?
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No problem.
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Yeah
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Truly the internet is a bizarre place.
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New chapter has arrived!
Another well done chapter. Appreciate the work going into the characterizations and future chapter set-up. Really liked "Haven's" reflection on what was expected and what actually happened - particularly the stuff that went into the preparations, the size of the crowds and the similarities between human speech and pony speech. And, yeah, things are going to get rough fairly quickly.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
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Glad you enjoyed it. I've continued to build on another of the major themes of this series- memory, or rather what constitutes official memory and state power. Parades of this sort are as much a show of force as a celebration of a nation's history, and no doubt the pegasi are sending a very clear message to the other nations.
Indeed, more shall follow tomorrow.
They have an anthem!?
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1. History is riddled with awkward 'left the mic on' moments.
2. Yes. It was briefly mentioned back in Zipping It. It's sung to the melody of the British one, and the words are exceptionally simple; swap God for Faust and King for Queen.
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I see
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Glad to clean that up. The G5 community appear to have basically decided the pegasi are Britain, something I am more than happy to roll with (being British).
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Huh
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Also, new profile image I see.
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Yep, it's how I'd see myself in TOH/Owl House. I wish the site I made it on had better hair options but this one will do.
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It looks good!
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thx.
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Np.
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Don't suppose you could link said site... would ya please? :3
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sure thing
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And me, please!
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Sure thing.
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Thanks.
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np
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I appreciate it nontheless.
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Next chapter has arrived!
Excellent work on this latest chapter. REALLY liked the work going into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked the extra look at the Royal Pegasi family life as well as "Haven's" difficulty in finding her way around the castle AND the paperwork (and, yeah, legal documents CAN be frustratingly hard to translate). So, yes, the bit of relaxation at the end of the chapter with the stylist as well as "Zipp" and "Pipp" is most assuredly appreciated.
Quite certainly looking forward to more of this.
nice chapter mate
Huh, that was easy.
Damn!
I hope she doesn't regret this later.
Majesty,"*
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I was partially drawing on my own personal experience with my own line of work; lots of my day is occupied with wading my way through documents, some of which can be pretty hard to unscramble. I was trying to inject relatability into the characters, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
And as Haven herself points out, even royalty needs a chance to be normal every once in a while.
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Glad you liked it.
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1. Bear in mind who Zipp is in this situation.
2.
Key source of inspiration. Still one of the funniest films ever made, incidentally.
3. Hopefully.
4. I'll correct that error now.
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Chapter 4 has just arrived!
Again, you did some wonderful work on the world-building, exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. LOVED the stuff with the pool and exercise routine as well as the spa. Also liked the dialogue with the OCs and the reflections on how many depths the in-universe version of the military has.
REALLY looking forward to more of this.
I don't know how I feel about ponies having tanks