Visions of Memoria

by Lunaria

Epilogue

"Holy shit."

She let go of the girl and staggered back a step or two. Seeing the memories of someone else play out before her was unnerving to say the least, especially when you saw them from their perspective.

Wallflower sniveled."You must hate me."

Frankly she didn't have her thoughts in order to hate anyone at the moment. Even having been told what she could expect to see, experiencing it all first hand? Not even remotely the same as being told about it.

Wallflower lifted her hand, resting the green stone that otherwise hung around her neck on it. "It's why I don't deserve something like this."

Idly Sunset glanced at her own pendant, similar in style but one which had a completely different colour and symbol on it.

"Look," Sunset said as she took a step forward and placed her hand on Wallflower's shoulder. It'd been a long time since the Spring Fling, she was a different person now, a more mature person. "I'm not saying this isn't a lot, because it is, but we're still friends, no matter what."

"I..."

She quickly pulled Wallflower into a hug. "I know you're not the same person anymore either Wally, otherwise you'd not agree to me seeing those memories."

She could hear a whimper as the other girl buried their face in her chest.

It was going to be a long road, but Sunset knew things would be alright between the two of them again, she had to believe that.

Author's Note:

I kinda wanted to write another scene for this, but, eh, I think this is likely a better stopping point.

This story is a bit all over the place, but hopefully romance that don't work out is still romance, never really tried writing this genre before.

Comments

[Posh]

I know what that screenshot is from, but my brain insists on interpreting it as a vision of Wally looking askance at a weird faberge egg she found with a pirate’s treasure map.

And the vision is also in a toilet.

[Perfectly Insane]

This is really well done. I like the way you write Wallflower here a lot. How she acts feels exactly how someone with a crush on someone would act, from the clothing choice to how she was jealous of someone else despite not being in a relationship with them. Also the way you described when/how Sunset started treating her better was a really nice little way of telling the viewer at what point in the timeline things were happening.

[EileenSaysHi]

I like the concept of this story, and it does feel like a unique spin on Sunflower as a relationship (or not-quite-relationship in this case). But it does feel like it stalls somewhat as it goes along, and could have benefited from some editing. The epilogue is a bit abrupt. Still, you have some very good ideas and a lot of the dialogue between Sunset and Wallflower is very strong stuff. Thank you for your submission.