Rainbow Dash gets bored during a party. She starts doing trick dives into the lake. The other girls decide to do the same. Rainbow makes a contest out of it.
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Geez, man! I have trouble keeping with the pace you're popping out stories!
Fun little Slice of Life fic. And yeah, figures Rainbow's ego would consider herself the best prize. I hope that means at least a week of servitude to the winner.
Didn't take you for a shipper so it surprised me to see Rarijack in this. Personally, I like Applejack more with Twilight. Then again, the same goes for Rarity. He.
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Lol I need to slow it down.
I'd assume Rainbow just followed Starlight around annoying her for a while before the unicorn just told her to go home, lol.
To be honest, I've always liked RarixJack since Look before you sleep.
I always had trouble shipping Twi with the mane 6. Then I started loving Starlight. Then life made sense, lol.
Thanks for reading! Appreciate it.
They totally dodged the bullet, Fluttershy would've outdone everyone if participated. Beware the quiet ones, all that
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Or she would've drowned, lol.
aww poor Twilight!
though really, those fantasies should be moderated by remembering that it’s Rainbow Dash promising this
aww she is such a talented lilac mare
i am glad Twilight has a realistic notion of what Rainbow Dash’s prize is
aww she is so perfect
so true
oh that is very Starlight
and that is so Dash. poor Starlight!
Yeah, entirely understandable reaction from Starlight. That prize comes with some big questions about what it actually entails…
In any case, it’s honestly impressive how much story you were able to fit into the allotted word count, especially given the size of the cast. Great job throughout. Thank you for it.
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Um, ok, gonna be honest here, I thought this meant something else for a second.
Ok, to be truthful to your reviews, I am gonna do this review without editing it. Kind of an ‘unscripted review’ of sorts.
Anyways, with the story itself, it’s a bit short, but I am guessing that’s kind of the point. There really wasn’t much of a conflict or even build-up, it throws you right in, then right to the conclusion. Interesting read.
Wasn’t expecting the Rarijack, it made me do a 180.
This type of writing feels reminiscent of season 1 of My Little Pony, it’s kind of wholesome and very laid back.
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This was done for the 1000 word contests before. Honestly I think the 1000 word fics I did are some of my worst work. Can't stretch your muscles or be as expressive I'd like. Thank you for reading!
Lol, now that you mention it I can definitely see Rainbow thinking that.
Rarijack is one of my OTP.