Rainbow and Pinkie get into a contest over who can hold a hug the longest. Who will win? What might they discover as they make their way around town?
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Rainbow and Pinkie get into a contest over who can hold a hug the longest. Who will win? What might they discover as they make their way around town?
Cover done by IrradiatedPirateBooty.
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Rinkie Pash 😊
Painbow Die 😭
That was really, really cute. Thanks for writing it!
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Thank you so much!
Cute, funny, and... strangely very in-character for everyone.
That was so sweet! Great job writing this story!
Well, it was sweet and in-character, and I think the idea is adorable and funny, perfect for these two! But I’m not sure you executed it the way you wanted to. The writing felt a little forced, and a tad simple, like “I’ve hugged Pinkie for an hour and shes cute. Hugged for two hours and I wanna date.”
But overall, it was good! A cute and great idea, just needs refinement! Keep it up!
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Thank you for the feedback, I will keep it in mind!
This was so wonderfully written and it was adorable seeing the gradual shift in Rainbow's thoughts from start to finish. Definitely worked this premise best from her perspective. Awesome job writing this!
Omfg I love your PinkieDash stories sm!! They're always so cute and have me blushing, giggling, and kicking my feet<333
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I have good news, I've written more!
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WJEIDIEJTIEIEIEUEJWUB AHHH THANK YOUUU ILL BE WAITING FOR THEM FR<33 TAKE YOUR TIME!!!
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Painbow Die
Certainly a very unfortunate name
I have to say Silk Rose, you have once again impressed me, I don't really read PinkieDash stories (like, at all)