Despite a war being declared several days ago, Anonfilly is committed to continue to peeving off Twilight through antics. After stealing a guardsmare's uniform, an unusual punishment inadvertently causes Anonfilly to worry about friends, the war, and a previous romantic relationship.
Based in the Equestria at War universe, written for the 2023 summer write contest.
Cover art done by the magnificent misakayy! https://twitter.com/pizzahutjapan
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Anonfilly seems like the best candidate for changeling replacement. She's very close to Twilight and knows things she probably shouldn't.
I do appreciate that they did explain part of the premise of Anonfilly in the story, even if I do find the concept and pony behaviors towards it somewhat disturbing.
The story's derailed a little bit by the overly melancholic ending, but I appreciate the attempt to weld "Show Equestria" to Equestria at War. But the Twilight "romance" at the end is a bit much and doesn't land. It doesn't really feel like "War was declared" in any major way, which could be impactful if the story was more serious about how the realization hasn't hit the majority of Equestrians yet. As it is, it's not shitposty enough to be a Anonfilly story, and not enough of an Equestria at War story.
Why so many dislikes? I felt like it’s less cringe and typical anonfilly and equestrian at war story.
Is there a chance this story will continue?
Interesting concept! I'm excited to keep reading!