Trinity Bellucci, a convicted murderer and infamous mob boss, finds herself being reborn in a whole new world after being executed by the state. Maybe she'll make some friends- after all, Friendship is Magic.
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Ohhhh.. those bounty hunters.. I think I know who they aaarree.. or weeeree.. they were the ones Gallus took to the orphanage after he stole their mom's money, aren't they?
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The worst thing you can do, when someone tries to predict something in your story, is respond.
Saying maybe means yes.
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... yeah, that's fair.
I'm sorry :(
I'm curious how twilight was able to force the king to punish his own citizens for crimes committed in another country
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So basically, less than plot relevant spoilers ahead! I just wanted to explain my line of thinking. Grover does not want to draw the ire of the largest and most powerful kingdom on Equus. The problem is that Twilight is still somewhat naiive and doesn't yet realize her true potential- also, the fact that she's too nice.
If she wanted to, she could have easily said "hand over the fugitives or I will send somepony to get them. And if I must send somepony, they will not be as kind as I have been."
So thats why she felt the need to make a compromise- because as a student of friendship, that's her sort of MO. And the reason Grover agreed to a compromise is because he knew that Twilight could potentially be a very, very bad enemy to make.
As for the citizenship thing- it doesnt work like modern countries. The gist of it is that you are a citizen to whatever nation you are loyal to. Its more complicated than that, but this is starting to drag :3
One of the things I enjoy about this fic is Leona and Diamond Tiara's relationship. I like that them getting together wasn't drawn out for the entire story, since a lot of writers have characters get together near or at the end. I really like that they don't always click, but are able to work things out. The aspects of a relationship post confession can be just as enjoyable to read as the build up, but I feel like it's not done enough in long stories as much.
Nice!
Incidentally, Leona hasn't done anything completely sociopathic in the past four chapters. Strange that.
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Ironically enough, I was actually concerned that I made their relationship start too soon- because really, they met in one chapter and about two chapters later they were dating... but then again, they had been best friends for 10 years at that point. Moreso- I was concerned that me shipping the main character with a canon character would turn a bunch of people off of this story hahaha
Glad that wasn't the case :3
Honestly, scenes with Diamond Tiara and Leona are my favorite to write because I find them to show an interesting dichotomy. The best example I can think of is when they were on the run, and Leona's rugged nature clashed heavily with Dee's more "prim and proper" nature, despite her darker tendencies- as was pointed out by the state of their outfits when they finally arrived; Dee's outfit was basically ruined from a lack of washing, while Leona's garb was perfectly fine, if a little smelly. But on the opposite end of the dichotomy spectrum is the fact that Leona is the more submissive one in the relationship.
Daily reminder that Leona has a killcount in the double digits between her two lives, possibly approaching triple. She's lied, cheated, and stolen her way to the top. She is about to break the geneva convention. She's changed lives and the world at large in unimaginable ways. At one point, she was leading the largest criminal empire Equestria has ever seen, all as a means to an end.
She gets home, dead tired from a long day of military training. She asks her wife, "Can I be the little spoon tonight?"
They may have their differences, but they love eachother to hell and back. It also helps that they're both kinky fuckers :P
Dunno why I went on this massive tangent... but bottom line is, I'm glad people enjoy their relationship as much as I do :3
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Hey, it's not a war crime if it's the first time 😃
A lot of yellow motifs surrounding Leona in this chapter. I wonder why