Scootaloo: A Princess's Daughter

Scootaloo is a orphan who later gets adopted by Cinderella. Let's see how it will go for her. And some magic will happen.

Shouts to ChazMLPFIM for helping me with this.

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Found by a Princess · 2nd Nov 2023 · 241 words
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Animal Bonding · 2nd Nov 2023 · 382 words
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Going To the Ball · 2nd Nov 2023 · 404 words
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At the Ball/ A Family at Last · 2nd Nov 2023 · 680 words
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The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #1 · Nov 3rd, 2023 · · · At the Ball/ A Family at Last ·

I wrote a similar story a few years back. Funnily enough, the cover art is based on a scene from the story I wrote!

Fluttershyisacutegal

Fluttershyisacutegal #2 · Nov 3rd, 2023 · · · At the Ball/ A Family at Last ·

very cute!

ChazMLPFIM

ChazMLPFIM #3 · Nov 3rd, 2023 · · · At the Ball/ A Family at Last ·

Cute

TheDriderPony

TheDriderPony #4 · Nov 3rd, 2023 · · · Animal Bonding ·

Small note: several times you've used "step-daughters" when I believe you meant "step-sisters".

"Step-daughters" would only be accurate if we were speaking in terms of her late father (or if they're the Prince's kids from a previous relationship).

Roberto The Stormtrooper

Roberto The Stormtrooper #5 · Nov 3rd, 2023 · 1 · · At the Ball/ A Family at Last ·

Honestly, this seems like a really wholesome story, and the idea of pairing these two together is really sweet.

Big Imagination E

Big Imagination E #6 · Nov 3rd, 2023 · 1 · · At the Ball/ A Family at Last ·

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I’m glad you think it’s sweet. Cause honestly Scootaloo deserves to have a new family after she lost her old one.

ChazMLPFIM

ChazMLPFIM #7 · Sunday · 1 · · At the Ball/ A Family at Last ·

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"Well hello there." He said.
"Um hi." Scootaloo said back.
"I am Todd. What's your name?" He introduced.
"I am Scootaloo."
"Lovely name." Todd said making her blush. "Are you from around here? I don't seem to recognize you."
"Well let's say im not from here and I didn't have a pleasant childhood." Scootaloo said sadly.
"Oh im so sorry I hear that. I shouldn't talk about it anymore." Todd said making sure not to upset her more.
"It's not your fault." Scootaloo assured.
"So miss Scootaloo. Would you like a dance?" Todd said offering his hand.
"Sure Todd." Scootaloo said taking his hand and waltzing with him. While Scootaloo was dancing with Todd we cut to Cinderella waltzing with the prince. The two were enjoying everything that the ball had to offer. Since the spell was permanent they didn't have to worry about the spell wearing off. After a few hours off enjoying the ball Scootaloo said goodbye to Todd as he left heading home. Then she saw Cinderella and Prince Charming walking to her.

You should change Todd's name to Rumble.

Big Imagination E