Twilight Sparkle is overworked and plagued with guilt over the fate of 'the mean three'. Meanwhile, Starlight Glimmer grapples with feelings that bubble to the surface at inopportune moments as well as a daunting new job, and Spike once again attempts to get closer to the mare of his dreams. Set some time after 'The Last Problem'.
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Here's a better idea! Why not make someone Twilight loves a princess? Like someone she would love to spend an eternity with? Usually when a princess marries another, they become Queen or empress, that would be an interesting story.
Anyways this story is interesting, I hope to see more.
Wrong, Gallus, its Twilight’s conscience is making her doubt her actions which is odd given how many years it finally reach Twilight.
Don’t say that garbage, Spike! You’re only saying that to protect the traitor who was the mastermind who brought them together and planned to used them as Twilight’s stepping stones to the throne.
No... its like... Family Guy’s earlier seasons, TV14
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Gotcha. Thanks. And thanks for reading too!
Good, otherwise this story would have been rated mature.
I think the rating should stay at Teen but maybe add a sex tag for suggestiveness.
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OK, thanks!
Lovely writing!!! Can't wait to see where this goes <3
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Thank you, you're very kind.
This is the first story I have read on this site where Twilight now patrols the dream realm, I'm a little surprised. I'm more surprised others haven't thought of the idea.
I mean she litterly takes the jobs of both Celestia and Luna now, it only makes sense she goes to the dream realm and stops nightmares from happening.
11867921 true I hope cozy glow will get reformed in this story maybe at the end of it i love it when cozy gets reformed and I agree with you both spike just don't want twilight to help them and gallus don't want twilight to get hurt but her not helping them is hurting her but good story so far
nice job on all chapters out
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Thank you very much!
Spike having a mental conversation with himself? Hilarious.
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Lol, thanks. I was pretty pleased with that bit.
No offense but I think the redemption will failed. I mean how many years have the Legion has been in stone? I mean Discord did say that he heard everything when he was petrified. Besides I mean they might heard about Twilight was going to reform them as some of the guards will take about how they deserved being turned to stone despite it was Discord who masterminded everything and yet, he gets away scot-free
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None taken. Well, we'll see. I'd be lying if I said I had everything planned out, I'm sure what happens will be as much of a surprise to me as to everyone else. Though I think it's less about the redemption, and more about the chance, something that Tirek and Cozy Glow at least, never got. Remember, Cozy Glow was thrown in Tartarus the second she was found out, small wonder she came back for a second try. And is what she did (attempt to remove magic from the world) really that different from what Starlight tried to do the first time around? Except on a larger scale? If Starlight can achieve redemption, why not Cozy Glow? In any case, it won't be an easy path. (And as to the Discord being able to hear and see everything while he was petrified thing, that may just be because he has literally god-like powers. We don't know that it's the same for everycreature else. Yet.)
Anyhoo, thanks for reading this far!
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I want to agree on that but since Discord did help out in turning those 3 to stone, he might made them head everything other say around them as revenge for stealing his magic and putting Fluttershy in a cell.
nice work
Mhmmm, sure.
Finally she realizes, honestly I never seen someone so blind of there own feelings.
I am curious how powerful Twilight is at this point in time, probably more powerful than Celestia and Luna combined, if not then atleast more powerful than Celestia.
I don't see the big deal, my only concern however is that since Spike is a dragon, that means he lives for hundreds or thousands of years so he will outlive Rarity just like how Discord will outlive Fluttershy and Cadance outliving Shining Armor.
What is up with mortals dating immortals or longer living creatures than them? Seriously, there all gonna end up heartbroken in the end.
He probably already knows everything that's going to happen and probably doesn't want any part of it or knows it's to important for him to get involved with.
When I read this, my thoughts immediately went to Queen Chrysalis although she is in stone, but I still have a quastion on why her horn is glowing a different color.
This coming from Rainbow Dash? I would expect that to come from Pinkie Pie or Fluttershy but RAINBOW DASH!?
I doubt Twilight has, if she has then I wonder who she was dreaming about cause my only guess would be Flash Sentry but I really hope not.
Uuuuuugh, please don't tell me I'm gonna have to sit around for 30 minutes reading how AppleJack's and Rainbow's love life has been going.
If I am, I'm just gonna lay down and just listen to the story than read it, wouldn't be the first time I did that, it would actually be the second time I did that throughout the 1,000+ stories I Finnished reading.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Thanks for reading. Whoo, there's a lot to unpack there. Let me say first off that this chapter was a pain to write, and I kinda rushed the tail end of it because I just wanted the damn thing to be done.
Twilight: I'd say she is at least comparable to Celestia in terms of power at this point in time.
Rarity: It's not so much that her and Spike are a big deal, she just hasn't quite finished sorting out her feelings on the matter, and besides, she's trying to delay the inevitable ribbing she'll get from the others.
Rainbow Dash: Ah come on, it's not unheard of for Dashie to be slow on the uptake.
Twilight's horn: Yeah, you're right on this one. I wanted different spells to be more distinctive, but now I'm reading it back it doesn't make much sense, and leads the reader in a false direction. I'll go change that bit.
Applejack: It's not going to be how their love life is going, just how it started, something that irritatingly we never got from the show OR the comics. If that's not your bag feel free to skip it. Hopefully it'll be shorter than this chapter.
Anyhoo, thanks again for sticking with this fic this far.
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No problem, tbh I'm more interested on Twilight and Starlight Glimmer and what there going to be doing.
And I don't like skipping parts of chapters (that's why I usually skip entire chapters and then go back to reading it eventually) because that it doesn't count as me finishing the story.
Every story I added in my completed libary, I've read every single word from start to finish throughout the entire story, not a word skipped and I like to keep it that way so I can say "I completed all these stories from start to finish" without lying and me being proud of myself, although I read 50,000+ words a day.
I'm hoping to reach 10,000,000 total words read soon, haven't checked in a while but I believe it's a little over 9,400,000, I'm also hoping in the future I can reach a total of 70,000+ words read a day, that might take a year or 2. (Or it will probably never happen, I'm starting to run out of interesting things to read and it's only been 6 months since I first discovered this site, not surprising though since I did read over 1000 stories)
Aaaand I just realized I've been blabbering.
Yeah that makes sense Twilight didn’t want Discord to help because his last help nearly got Equestria destroyed for trying to boost Twilight’s confidence. Her trust is Discord isn’t strong because of his actions. Tell one thing though, has Twilight ever venture to Tirek’s homeland?