Finally got the time to read your story, and it's great, just like your other stories, and it's been a long while sense I read FoE story, and I sure it will turn out great. I do like the Black light's situation with still struggling to grasp that everything she had been taught was a lie, but her blunt honesty and taking ponies at face value if going to bite her in the flanks. I do wonder what is the stable's purposes is in training and testing those foals from birth and them apparently euthanized right after they graduate, sounds like eugenics projects of some kind that seems linked to the cutie mark maybe. it's curious that Black Light seems to be a unicorn pony and Zebra hybrid, I wonder how she got those genetics so many generations removed from the ponies before the war, either they had a sizable zebra population in the stable when they sealed up, or that they used genetic sample they had in could storage maybe vat or invitro. From the looks of it the foals have never know any family structures in their lives, which sort of reminded me of Darling in the FranXX in a way. I am guessing the fact that she has Zebra genetics might be the reason why she was so delayed in getting her cutie mark in her life, because it's trigged in a different way. I wonder if some of the other foals have those genetics too that pore while colt could be one of them. I do like Gamma Ray, in a way he sounds like a mirror reflection of Blacklight that will turn into a tragedy, and from his name I can guess that the next time we will see him he will have considerably 'Hulk' up. Back to Blacklight I am she sound very stubborn and dogmatic in her belief of being a savior will be what pulls her through forcing the Wasteland to conform to her
From the looks of the defender's is sounded like they were planning to bait the raiders into attacking them and were 'maybe' slightly more Friendly then the raiders but it seems that she has burned her bridges before she had the chance to learn about them. But seeing that the school she came out of Fillydelphia Stable, it's more likely that they are affiliated with slavers, you can be sure that she is probably very close to Red Eye's attention or that the story take place from before he came into power.
The Trio of Raids certainly seem hilarious in how blatantly bad as they are, and it's obvious that they will have Black Light on the menu, but she will have the better of them. I wonder if they will become her flunkies trying to stave off their execution by her hooves to keep passing off as innocent ignorant surface dwellers.
Sorry for missing out on commenting on the PBB story, I have been just... not there struggling with issues, I did like this version and it felt really immersive this time around; top quality. I hope you will continue it again soon.
Wow! Another exhilarating chapter with our heroine BlackLight! I can't wait to see what she does next!!
Can you hurry up and finish this so I can read it all without having to wait for the next chapter? Smh
This is so good, I need more. Loving the fight scenes, Wonder what will happen next
Finally got the time to read your story, and it's great, just like your other stories, and it's been a long while sense I read FoE story, and I sure it will turn out great. I do like the Black light's situation with still struggling to grasp that everything she had been taught was a lie, but her blunt honesty and taking ponies at face value if going to bite her in the flanks. I do wonder what is the stable's purposes is in training and testing those foals from birth and them apparently euthanized right after they graduate, sounds like eugenics projects of some kind that seems linked to the cutie mark maybe. it's curious that Black Light seems to be a unicorn pony and Zebra hybrid, I wonder how she got those genetics so many generations removed from the ponies before the war, either they had a sizable zebra population in the stable when they sealed up, or that they used genetic sample they had in could storage maybe vat or invitro. From the looks of it the foals have never know any family structures in their lives, which sort of reminded me of Darling in the FranXX in a way. I am guessing the fact that she has Zebra genetics might be the reason why she was so delayed in getting her cutie mark in her life, because it's trigged in a different way. I wonder if some of the other foals have those genetics too that pore while colt could be one of them. I do like Gamma Ray, in a way he sounds like a mirror reflection of Blacklight that will turn into a tragedy, and from his name I can guess that the next time we will see him he will have considerably 'Hulk' up. Back to Blacklight I am she sound very stubborn and dogmatic in her belief of being a savior will be what pulls her through forcing the Wasteland to conform to her
From the looks of the defender's is sounded like they were planning to bait the raiders into attacking them and were 'maybe' slightly more Friendly then the raiders but it seems that she has burned her bridges before she had the chance to learn about them. But seeing that the school she came out of Fillydelphia Stable, it's more likely that they are affiliated with slavers, you can be sure that she is probably very close to Red Eye's attention or that the story take place from before he came into power.
The Trio of Raids certainly seem hilarious in how blatantly bad as they are, and it's obvious that they will have Black Light on the menu, but she will have the better of them. I wonder if they will become her flunkies trying to stave off their execution by her hooves to keep passing off as innocent ignorant surface dwellers.
Sorry for missing out on commenting on the PBB story, I have been just... not there struggling with issues, I did like this version and it felt really immersive this time around; top quality. I hope you will continue it again soon.
Black light in 10 chapters at this rate "Help I've accidentally joined the baltimare mafia"