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Awww >< one of the shortest yet most beautiful renditions of the tale of the two sisters I've ever read <33
Gorgeous writing style. I am impressed by your style switch telling the story of her battle against her sister. Instead of a calm straightforward description, the battle is told in an overwhelming rush of fragmented sensations and panicked thoughts — just as Celestia experienced it, barely able to process the experiences thrown at her. Also, thank you for adding the closure of such an adorable ending.
Nice
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Wouldn't have done it without you o7.
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Thanks! I was actually worried it was too short, but I'm happy you liked it! The ending was something I was thinking of removing aswell, but decided to keep it.
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nice
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Noice
Alright I'll read this soon
Pretty good story for the eclipse. I like it.
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glad you enjoyed!
A nice little story. I've read a few different versions of the fight that lead to Luna's banishment. This is one of the better ones. Congratulations for being Featured.
Have a Spikestache.
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I love Spikestaches
ah damn... cyn got equestria
I note you used the 'Lullaby for a Princess" animation progression for the battle. I approve.
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it is best animation