Trixie has a lot of money(don't ask her how she got it) so she decides to spend her day on the beach just relaxing, away from Twilight.
But nothing is ever easy for Trixie.
Eh, shattered freedom is worse than poison.
Trixie has a lot of money(don't ask her how she got it) so she decides to spend her day on the beach just relaxing, away from Twilight.
But nothing is ever easy for Trixie.
Deserved
And I like making holes. Especially in purple capes
Aw, but I like doing that
Good read
Good Story!
I'm conflicted. I want to like this story, and there's plenty in it to like. There's lots of jokes, but I feel like there might almost be too many jokes. Reading this, I felt like the jokes came and went so quickly that I didn't even have time to process them, so they didn't have much effect on me. I get what you were going for with this story, and I guess you succeeded, but it just didn't work for me. Additionally, you have a large number of mechanical errors (grammar, punctuation, etc) throughout, which were a bit distracting.
Good story keep writing !