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Professor britelite
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Professor britelite
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I love that cover art! Premise looks very interesting too
Harsh to leave us with such a Cliffhanger right at the start, but damn, I now certainly want to read more of it now.
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Dont worry!! >:D new chapters will most likely be posted every other day haha, this has lowkey been a thing im very excited to show everyone!!
with out even reading it it kinda fells like two-face, with the image alone
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Thank you so much!! <3
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i took inspiration somewhat!! youre awesome for seeing it XD
Hmm. Seems like an interesting enough premise, and that was a solid opening. I shall keep an eye on this one.
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Thank you!!
Will Cozy Glow and Tirek be playing any role in this story?
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Chrysalis jumped ship as soon as they got defeated basically, tirek and cozy glow got turned to stone still, so no.
holy shit! I'm interested where this'll end up, but can't rush some people, cause writing takes time (aka typing a new chapter) that's all I have ta say
That cover makes me think this is going to be like Slaughter High
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Baking you a whole cake with a bouquet of flowers right now for this comment aaah!!
Thank you so much though!! im working on the next chapter currently! should be out sometime this week! <33
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I don't know what that is, but i hope that's a complement?? haha
I was gonna say on WHY would she not only betray Rainbow Dash, despite trying to save her life from the horrible accident? And her friends and family by joining somebody despicable like Chrysalis?
That is until Iconicgg mentioned she does look like Two-Face/Harvey Dent.
THIS stuffsS SO GOOD BRO!!! will be waiting for more!
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Thank you so much!!
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kk I'll be waiting patiently for it
I love this i will be waiting for the next chapter patiently as i can🤣🤣
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thank you!! <3 should be soon ;)
Lose is a powerful thing it can make us angry at the world and everyone in it. The next 1 minute where crying in our friends arms. Especially when it's so sudden
This is great so far. You managed to portray both Applejack and Applebloom's grief in two very different, but realistic ways.
I'm very excited to see where this story will go. Good job
I love the art and i hate how short it was but it was so good keep it up👍👍
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Exactly!!
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Thank you so much!! I'm very glad i portrayed different types of grief well!
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Thank you so much!! And I'm sorry its a bit short DX, the next chapters will be much longer i assure you!!<3
Well, it's still managing to hold my interest, which is rare for a story with these tags ^^
I will say however, that you either need to step up your editing game or get an editor, because for as interesting the story is, it is full of punctuation and grammatical errors. Either way, keep up the good work!
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Thank you!<3 i might end up asking some friends out to make the process faster, thank you for the kind criticism !
damn man, I enjoy this story, but geez it hits me in the gut sometimes, but it is enjoyable, I wonder what the 2nd chapter will be like? hmm just got to wait for it
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Ahaha! Thank you very much!! You shall see 👀
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aye
I can help you with editing. My discord is wumboko. If you're looking for more feedback/help, this site has a discord community that can help you. You can join the server off the site or I can send you an invite if you want.
The story and idea is good, but the grammer can be improved