This story is a sequel to Bad Luck
So I just realized that my OC, Starlight, from this 3-year-old story, shares her name with Starlight Glimmer, who was recently introduced to the show. Small world, I guess?
Rainbow Dash, Thunder Flash and Soarin are back in the FOURTH sequel to Bad Luck, following Huge Mistake!
In the previous story, Rainbow had given birth to an alicorn. This is what happens when the family and friends try to uncover some answers. What could it mean? Is there anything royal about Rainbow or Soarin? What don't they know? Why am I asking you this?
Chapters (15)
Yay
now time to fav
I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but this chapter stunk something fierce. May have been that feeling of repetitiveness I was getting, but I'm not sure at the moment.
the FORTH?!
I lol'd
Great to see you back though
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I know.
I originally intended on doing three stories to make it a trilogy, but I suddenly got a huge idea. I had to make it a fourth sequel, because it was getting way off topic from the plot of the third story. I should be done after this, though!
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I like the way you told me that. When some people don't like my stories, they just insult me. I understand if you don't like it, not everyone has to.
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I've always wondered: how did you get that quote box from the story?
1432263 I think it's a script thingy I found somewhere, I don't know where though, or you could just use these [quote ] [/quote ] Taknig away the spaces at the ends of course
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If I'm going to crap on a fic I'll do it with dignity.
This was awesome as rainbow saying our, and your or MY alot seemed abit harsh but for rainbow to have an alicorn, with soarin. would rainbow leave flash for him?
I loved all the story's from start to finish and can't wait for more your a brilliant writer a big wel done again.
plus why so many dislikes I loved it.
T.peters
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For some reason, most of my stories start with more dislikes than likes.
But after a while, the likes slooowly start to surpass the dislikes.
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Soarin isn't even looking after his alicorn and rainbow is acting like she's happy to have soarin. But then again as they say it was a mistake and flash and rainbow and living together but if rainbow didn't have stitchers would she of does it again with soarin as from the joke "have fun but not to much fun" plus soarin saying that " we are both skilful and powerful ponys from the wonderbolts." Rainbow to mee seems happy to have soarin:( pour flash the pain you must be going thought with rainbow cheating on you and looking after the alicorn that isn't yours :( I am looking forward to more keep it up. And FYI I will always be commenting as I love to share my appinions
Mike, there story's are fantastic reading them all and can't wait for more. It upsets me with a talent like ur's is getting dislikes
Btw if you read my story "the grass we walk" the 2 chapters were done by me Thomas P and the 3rd chapter will be up soon, if you are planning on reading it would be an honour if you would. :D and I have been comment from start to finish and loved your story and looking forward to more. Mate your brilliant, keep it up you are watched and favourited and waiting for more. a big wel-done
T.peters
I must ask are you in the process of chapter 2 of answers (hitting face on desk of broaden waiting for news, and replys,
T.peters
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I have some free-time today, so I guess I can get started on that! Minecraft is a big distraction for me, you know?
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Arh yes the adictive game minecraft. on what softwere/console?
Well thank you that's means alot coming from a skilful writer. To write a shit load of chapters and 4 sequels you should proud
btw what on the comment did you like to have 2
as I can see you are loving my comments :D
T.peters
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The two
was from the whole comment in general, the fact that you already wanted more chapters. 
btw I play Minecraft on an HP computer running Windows 7. I feel blessed that the game runs so well!
arh yes, well the big comment above is what i'm wondering so far. as i see rainbow likes soarin and left flash in pain
also to have an alicorn is with soarin and rainbow. the element should of told her something being loyalty. only to wonder how flash must be feeling and to also take it quite well with soarin is beyond me. so many question (banging me head on desk again, wondering what going to happen)
im happy you enjoy my commenting. the fact that i am looking forward to more chapters.
i love you story is amazing, i can't get enough of it. i just so ager to wait for more chapter. keep up the brilliant work.
also that hearing that you like me. well my good sir that touched me. keep up the fantastic work.
you're fan
T.peters
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1439123 could i ask a question as i did say before i loved you're story would it be okay if i recorded me reading for people to read this story aswel?
i say it mite give you more views and likes as i have been asked on you tube to do reading records and after this i say/ could i read yours
?
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Yes, that would be amazing! Too bad I can't make it up to you, though.
Yeah, go right ahead!
1445259 awwww this is going to be awesome :D and well there is something you can do to make it up too me :D
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Okay, I will! The next chapter is finished!
1445392 awe-yeah
T.peters
yes this chapter is awesome :D
but i so have the feeling rainbow is going to leave flash because of soarin the cunt. why did there have to happen stupid rainbow.
blaze what a word "Catastrophe" 
thats awesome. i am looking forward to more chapters FYI i did this recording first since it was ready when i began recording 
i loved it keep up the brilliant work and love the pictures the expression helps alot :D 
T.peters
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That's strange, you finished reading this chapter EXACTLY when I did.
By the way, what website and username are you recording this on? I have to see it!
1446622 hahaha that's so strange indeed :D for us to finish EXACTLY at the same time
http://soundcloud.com/thomas-peters-6/my-lalliby-for-the-fanfic
have you read my story at all? :D i am waiting on you're response as from what you think of it. btw i did the Lullaby which is my second voice record please do tell me what you think?
and here is the link
sorry about some of the words i had to repeat them as this is my very first one.
idiot me. i do hope you like it :D for a first time :D
http://soundcloud.com/thomas-peters-6/anwsers-voice-record
i do hope you like it :D
T.peters
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Oh, sorry! I never got around to that. I'll be sure to do that when I'm done with school tomorrow!
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can't wait for next chapter, as i an trying very hard to not *bang my relentlessly on the desk waiting for news hehe. btw you're just awesome :D
its quite alright. do tell me what you think when you have the time? i did post the link for you as you was so eager. to see it :D the recording on you're story chapter Near-Death Experience
T.peters
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I have a small fraction of free-time before I have to go to school, so I got to see the voice-recording. Let me just say, I was totally geeking out over listening to someone else read my story!
It was great!
I'll get to read your story after I get home from school. Sound good?
1449800 yes that sounds awesome :D
i hope the voice record was okay for a first time 
and yeah mate anyever you have the time :D asit would be an honor too see what you think 
btw a quick little thing please do listen to the lullaby as the link will be in chapter 2 to understand it completely :D looking forward to hear what you think :D 
again loved near death experiences and can't wait for more :D
T.peters
What
well I'm sure peligimy or something that allows a female to allow more then one husband is allowed I hope.
Edit: Somehow I want you to write a story of the other mane 6 finding there soul mates.
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That would require too much writer's block, and too many OCs.
It's a good idea, though!
omg! a brilliant 3rd chapter and i just laughed when i seen
"No sooner did she set the piece of adult literature on the table when she noticed that the foal’s wings were fully extended." bhahaha wing boner.
i just couldn't stop laughing. and nooo soarin is rainbows soul mate what sorcery!
..... this can't be, how is flash going to take this. 
brilliant chapter love it you gave me chuckles well done mate :D
T.peters
Ho.
Ly.
Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit, Sooonnnn!
~Rosalynn~
I just. Holy shited lol
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What are you two holy shitting about?
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Soarin' being Dash's possible soulmate, of course!!!
~Rosalynn~
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1520704 yea what that girl said lol
well, I'm interested to learn more about starlight's colt friend d'awww she kissed him that's adorable
:D I'm upset that i an 70% chance rainbow mite be with soran,
punches are going to be thrown if this happens. rainbow deserves flash a mean starlight and blaze are just the best with the perfect family 
don't think of me as a critic, as i know my self I'm terrible at it.
some of your quotes "crying was a rarity for Rainbow Dash." i didn't quite get it. until i put it to my self and thought" crying wasn't me, that's got to be rarity. but i couldn't hold them back. I was depressed and worried, thinking what i should do..
also its awesome so far :D
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What I mean by "Crying was a rarity for Rainbow Dash" is that it's rare for Rainbow Dash to cry. If something is a rarity for someone, it means that they rarely do the said thing.
1561847 oh, that's makes more scene *facehoof*
i don't see why this has so many dislikes
Amazing story anyways though! :)
At first I waz like " hahaha bitch slapped"
Then I waz like " dont kill her don't kill her don't kill her!"
uhhh... I can't say more...
*crawls into the corner and sobs*
Flash you monster!
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE YOU'RE A FREAK!
WHAT WILL YOUR CHILDREN THINK?!
*mindless flailing in the corner*
~Rosalynn~
1574930 my words exactly thank you.
This is nothing I intisapated I thought rainbow just would of gotten with soarin, but this.......
flash..... You monster, I thought it ended at the punch to the nose, then well I was flabagasted. Well, flash, twilight, AJ, and rarity are going to fuck you up when they find out. Applejack will beat the loving crap out of you. 
but I'm just guessing, why upsets me even more is rainbow and flash any not going to be together no more and rainbow is with soarin......... Oh god the kids, starlight and blaze oh no............... There isn't going to turn out well.
Brilliant chapter mate, my head may leave bruises, waiting for more chapter as so egar, to see more.
T.peters
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There's a song by Maroon 5 called "One More Night" that I think follows Rainbow's emotions perfectly after the events of this chapter. This is the link.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fwK7ggA3-bU
Listen to the song very closely, and see how the song relates to the story!