In the sequel to the fourth-generation series of My Little Pony, a young pony named Luca is living in times that are rapidly changing -- for the worse. As she meets new friends and goes through many hardships, she will unravel many mysteries from the long-forgotten past up to the present times, and she will learn that friendship -- and love -- truly is magic.
Crossover of Mother 3 (Earthbound 2) and G4 MLP
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Fun Fact: Beginning with the paragraph around the later-middle, "He began barking at the window and scratching at the door..." to the end of this chapter was written in one night, with minor corrections. Needless to say, it's the latest I've ever stayed up...I went to bed at about 7:40am
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SHOOT! The chapter got cut off near the end for some reason, but I just fixed it...
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SHO...
many views!
THANKS!
(There, now do it for Fluttershy!)
But I'd like feedback comments so I can see how the story is coming along with everyone...that is, if that's alright with you...
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Right, Let me be the first to do so.
I've blazed through all three chapters. A nice crossover. You gave them all dialogue that I believe would fit their characters very well, as well as keep in a relative closeness towards the game's own dialogue. Although at times, it does seem that Flint is more heartless, but this is negotiable since the tragedies that had so quickly befell him.
One of my biggest gripes, though, is the names of some of the crossover-ed ponies. I am willing to let Ditzy slide, because that's what Leder was for the most part of the game. Perhaps, when she reveals her true self she'll go by a different name.
However, I can NOT really accept the names of the Magypsies. Mostly, because, as far as I've seen/know, there aren't any ponies named after most of them. Plus Snips and Snails would be REALLY bad all-powerful ponies, yes? Now, if you did something along the lines of making the Mane 6 as the Magypsies with Trixie as the 7th, or if you have greater things in mind, just use the same Magypsies, name and all, but only in pony form. Which I believe would make it more of a....experience, like it was with them in the actual game (if you know what I mean.)
That's another thing. So far, it doesn't seem like there are many crossovers with the canon group. Although, we are very early into the story and I can suspect that more and more will appear in the later chapters.
It's an interesting concept. Giving the Mother 3 story a bit more emphasis and dialogue but keeping it the same....but with ponies.
Keep it up!
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Alright, it worked!
Glad to see how it's coming along so far! To explain the way I crossed them, I was playing Mother 3 once again and reading Fallout: Equestria about the same time, so I just started connecting it with MLP stuff in a similar fashion Fo:Eq did as I played and ended up coming up with...this! Lol!
Any negative critiques can't, for the sake of comments, be explained here...spoilers!
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