What if somepony you love was taken from you? Twenty years to the day, a mare had her father taken away from her, she visits him to celebrate her birthday, but what if her father is trapped in a dark cold prison. Will she be able to talk to him? Will she have the best birthday ever? Who is she and who is her father?
sweet it made me cry
Reminds me of the "Daddy Discord" video.
Please tell me this isnt the end! Its just too sad to leave without a second chapter
Poor Discord.
That sent my heart aflutter beatiful and wonderfuly done. I wish you smiles and gentle breezes Well done
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There might be an epilogue coming soon...
This was a sweet beginning Octavia expecting more and all the D'awww
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Thanks!
No dislikes?................*dislikes for the fun of it*
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Wow this is good I didn't cry but I was choked up at the end.
I love this. So. Much.
I know what it's like to not have a dad. I won't go into the details 'cause it'll make everything awkward.
/* manly tears */
Dear Screwball, my lovely daughter.
I'm grateful that you came to visit (I was actually brought to tears by such a thing), I usually don't get that much attention that often. Pity, no pony knows the fun they're missing when there's no chaos around, BORRING. But don't worry about me sweetie, I can find ways to fix that. And that's before I bust out of imprisonment once again; I can't wait to try it out, especially on a certain special someone, hehehe....
Thanks for coming by and for the cake. Although I couldn't touch it, I knew it was as delicious as any sort of mayhem.
See you again, soon.
Love
Discord
P.S. Just so you know my darling, although Celestia will always have special place in my heart, Dady has moved on and may have found a new love in his life (too bad she's on Celestia's side.....for now, hehehe...). Her name is Twilight she makes me want to Sparkel. Shhh, don't tell any pony
Well, this is really good for your second fanfic!
Screwball has her own Character Tag, you know.
Ow! Right in the feel.
that was so great! made me chock up a little
i better see a part 2 to this.
this is way too good to be a one shot! so please write more i wana know if Discord has his happy ending!
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I'll be working on part two next week, I've just been busy with other fics and school.
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cool and i know what you mean ive been writing none stop for a while now XD
daawwwww
Kinda fast epilogue but still aww.
D'AWWW
This is awesome. I love you.
Terrific
not bad it was a nice ending im happy it ended like this ^_^
Oh gawd, didn't realize ya made another part. Such generosity Celestia has. Maybe in some time, when Twilight isn't connected to the Elements of Harmony, they will see each other.
D'AWWW
Annnnd Everything hurts again..
screwball can't die right? because she has chaos powers too.....
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No, she can't die due to the fact that she was created by Discord.