• Member Since 11th Aug, 2012
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Wild & Lightning


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After Soarin' recovers from a known illness, He finds the true definition of loyalty when he returns home.

This was a 60 min. Challenge so nothing too fancy.

Cover drawn by me: KatHole23 on DeviantART. ~http://kathole23.deviantart.com/

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Comments ( 39 )

That's such a dueche move of a story:flutterrage:..... very well done... but I still hate you for it.:raritycry::raritycry:

YOU BASTARD! Did you just kill Rainbow?:flutterrage:

...:fluttershysad:

...:fluttercry:I fell like I might need a new heart after this one.:raritycry:

:applecry: This is one of the saddest story's i have ever read.

1628474>>1628808>

Glacier Chasm- I-im sorry..

Brony of Truth- Would you kill me if i said yes? Here you go::heart:

Brosofbronys- im hoping thats a good thing.. Seeming this is suppost to be sad.

The story made me incredibally happy at first. But when I read Dash's letter, my heart fell. Y U MAKE ME CRY!:raritycry:

1634087 Yes, i loved this story it was filled with love and sadness.But i almost started crying at the last paragraph.

This is the beautifulest and saddest story ever
+ it's awesome effect if you're listening to Love Story by Taylor Swift:raritydespair:

that was sooo messed up...still good story

It's been the second time i'm reading, and i'm still crying

1732844 Hahaa- thanks.
1733761 that ending... Haha.

WHY LIFE HAS TO BE SO UNFAIR???!!!!:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry: WHY?! Oh yeah, cool but sad story :raritydespair::fluttercry:

:applecry: Whyyyy, sweet story so so sad :raritycry:

I feel like I this story in real life before, cant remember where though.

Holy cow that's a brutal return home for soarin :twilightoops:

:applecry: My grandfather ded of the same thng when my mom was 8 he gave hs heart to save my grandmother.

That story s so sad rly lke t thogh and t moved my heart keep p the good work...

Comment posted by LeopardCay deleted Sep 17th, 2013

I LOVE IT! sad, but I love it! :rainbowdetermined2:
Just one question, what happened with Dash!:rainbowderp:

She, she gave him her heart.
That's meen that she died, for him.
I love it, soo much.
I almost cried when I get it, "I gave you my heart".
Pleas write more of this, what was soarin comment I have too know!
Please!

4823986 yeah! hehe. uh... I got it it kinda took me a while but I was thinkin about it and some other things a
few nights ago.and i just relised what it means. umm...i thought it meant she fell in love with him but thnks.

Loved the story:heart:
But the FEELS:ajsleepy::pinkiesad2::fluttershysad::fluttercry:
I hope you make more stories like this:heart::raritystarry:

I read this story 2 times before i actually understood what Dash did so sad :applecry::fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::pinkiecrazy::pinkiesad2::raritydespair::raritycry:

I never cry. NEVER. EVER. But today, when I read this, two tears were actually rolling down my face. :fluttercry: Congratulations! :twilightsmile:

I've seen this in a tumblr post about a girl and his boyfriend

I've never read a 1000-words story that affected me so badly like this one :fluttercry: :raritycry:

oh shit you made me cry:applecry::raritycry:

... oh, that's what she meant by "giving him her heart". I didn't know it was that literal!

I'm not a big shipper of SoarinDash, but this may change my mind.

4012670 she gave her heart to soarin wich means she died for him now,dashie's heart is keeping him alive.
:fluttercry:

:raritycry: SO SAD :raritycry: WHY DASH?! WHY?!:fluttercry::applecry::raritycry::raritydespair::ajsleepy:

So no one bothered to tell soarin about the operation? Wow. .:ajsleepy:

Wow, my heart just sank. Sad but amazing! :fluttercry::pinkiesad2:

Omc! That is heart wrenching! 😭😭

Oh my gosh!!!! :rainbowderp:

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