Apple Bloom didn't learn her lesson last Hearts and Hooves day and after a sad tale of Granny Smiths youth, she takes it upon herself to make a new potion to help her lift her spirits. Knowing how much trouble they got into last time, the other two Cutie Mark Crusaders try to convince her to get rid of the potion, before something terrible happens to them, once again.
What came next? Well, it will be a Hearts and Hooves day they will never forget...
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I like the way you told it like a spoOOooOOoooky ghost story!
Here's hoping it doesn't end up filled with necrophiliac bestiality.
3416312 Eh, think more like "Tales of the Crypt", "Are You Afraid Of The Dark", or "Goosebumps" in terms of story telling.
The "Romance" tag is appropriate only for the fact that it involves a long lost love, and the "Love Poison"...
Besides, there is no "sex" tag... and it's rated Teen.
Oh this story looks Killer,
I hope the plot isnt too Stiff,
Because i've been Dying to read a good cmc fic,
Most of them have been quite Ghastly.
3416486
Wooot!
Romance from beyond the grave!
This story definitely needs some artwork
3416486 I'm down for a good pun. Just make sure you don't resurrect any bad blood with those who can't appreciate such brain food
3416766 Thanks. Meh thinks i'll add artwork AFTER I'm done writing.
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*Pulls his head back along his shoulder and points boths hooves at you*
This guy.
And now the plot thickens!
Huzzah!
Also it seems Jack is DEAD set on getting Granny for himself
I demand more stories from Apparition Amphitheater!
This was an amazingly funny and romantic story.
Well that certainly was a fun read. I was initially hesitant to open this because, in my experience, Dark + Gore tags usually meant gratuitous gore I have little to no patience with. I'm so glad I was wrong this time.
I noticed a few misspellings here and there, but nothing too glaring. I also like how you set the mood, although I feel the Amphitheater bits weren't necessary and can be safely edited out without taking away from the story. Personally, I found the Dark tag odd since this wasn't dark at all, but that might be due to my odd sense of humor. I would suggest adding the Comedy tag, though, since the stuff that made this have the Dark and Gore tags were mostly played for humor.
Conclusion: an enjoyable gem that definitely should have more attention.
4122105 Thanks for the reply. Yeah, about the Dark Tag, it pretty much was for the way the story was written and it's offbeat sense of humor... kinda like how Corpse Bride and Nightmare Before Christmas can be considered "Dark".
As for the "Amphitheater bits", they do seem a bit out of place, buuuuuuut, I put them there to set it apart from most "horror" stories on the site in order to make it more like a "Tales from the Crypt" sort of thing. I plan on actually setting up a club called Apparition Amphitheater, where writers, as their avatars or internet persona's, tell "horror" stories set in Equestria regardless of how soft or hardcore they are, with this story being the first in the collection. Taking it out wouldn't hurt the story, no, but it would remove the intent behind the stories design.
Also, I think I just might add that Comedy tag as you suggested. I didn't think it was funny enough for it initially... And, I'll be sure to come back to fix any spelling or grammar errors in the near future...
Thank you for the comment.
4122105
Several years later, and I actually set up a club for this story (along with a few others). If you're still around the site, care to check it out?
It's called "The Apparition Amphitheater Anthology"
I like where this is going, hahaha
Little young ‘uns need to learn their lesson.
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Lol, they’ll learn, for sure.