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Captain L


A man born and raised in Worcester, MA. I like Mega Man. A lot. Fluttershy is best pony, and I will make her mine one day.

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AUTHOR'S NOTE: Don't judge my writing from this story, I hate it now.

Santa Christ saves Hearth's Warming Day. Because you couldn't guess that already.

Shamelessly using the creative property of That Guy With The Glasses. Santa Christ played by Rob Walker. If you haven't, go watch their stuff. It's good.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 41 )

well this is rather odd:rainbowhuh:

but Nostalgia Critic is hilarious:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

well why not take a shot

RIP Nostalgia Critic. Please stop being a muppet. I'm afraid of muppets.

The AVGN? THE AVGN resurrected King Sombra, a stand in for Sauron and Ganondorf, to ruin a Christmas-esque holiday for a kids cartoon and take over the world?

:rainbowhuh:

Comment posted by afterceasetoexist deleted Nov 18th, 2013
Comment posted by afterceasetoexist deleted Nov 18th, 2013

WE BELIEVE IN SANTA CHRIST!

I liked the hidden Hitchhiker's guide reference.

It's been up for a few hours and it's already got more votes than my previous story got in 3 months. Unfortunately, it's also much more negative. Since I'm just winging this story, nothing's really planned out, nothing else is written, how can I fix it? What exactly is wrong with it?

Comment posted by afterceasetoexist deleted Nov 18th, 2013

I like this. It amuses me greatly.

1694455
Not sure. Your spelling and grammar are fine, and while I could poke at the pacing a little, this isn't Deadly Serious or anything. Maybe it's random HiE hate? Dislike of pseudo-Christian parody? Minions of the AVGN?

......................................what the hell is this?

anyone know where i can find that vector of the main 6

Why does this have so many downvotes?

1695417
I got it from here. So, credit to this guy.

1695554
I'm still trying to figure that out. Please, people that don't like it, tell me why. I want to improve. You don't, I'm just going to give you more of the same.

1695624 I think they are just hating on either its relation to Channel Awesome, or its literal relation to Christianity (and the last one can be split into a few different reasons) I haven't read it yet, but judging from the comments its not because of poor literacy (which is by the way Kwl!) or grammar errors

NOTE TO ALL THOSE BEING NEGATIVE:
==> 1694455 <==

He is asking for input here, Ironic I was on a fic that was getting the manure disliked out of it last night and the author was deleting comments left and right many of them theoretically helpful and two posts from the TWE (respectful and not hateful I might add, yes I have seen a TWE go ape and sling ever more poo in the name of "helping" ) and yet others kept posting comments, yes some more er,... lets just say helpful then others but there was plenty of posting.

And yet this guy out right asks for input and almost nothing, lol.

Now for me specifically it is the whole "Santa-Christ" thing, as a pretty potent christian I am offended by the notion of combining the two as this usually requires Christians to compromise some of the values that are core to our belief system so I am probably not even going read it.

However that does not mean I clicked the dislike button either, seems well intended or at very least not ill-willed so might not float my boat but I see no reason to poke a hole in someone else's.

Anyways that is all :moustache:

I'll be honest, I never even considered the whole "offensive to Christians" thing. I am a Christian. Not much of one, but one nonetheless. I actually got a few suggestions that that may be the issue, but shrugged them off.

If you find it offensive, I'm sorry, I was not intending it to be that way. I'd just like to point out once again that Santa Christ is not my creation. He is a recurring character on the Nostalgia Critic, an amazing combination of Christmas icons played for laughs that everybody loves.

I believe in you Santa Christ! And the writer too! :moustache:

Electrical engineering: pretty smart. General relativity: pretty fucking smart! This storry: ... FUCKING GENIUS!!!!

FIRST AND MY SIDES AGAIN!

You know, that's a good point. Why didn't they try to use the Elements against Sombra when he returned? Well, outside of the fact that if it worked it would have been a short episode.

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You could say that it was because the Elements were safely in Canterlot. Which of course raises the point that if they knew there could be a danger, why not take the Elements with them. So, cartoon logic, in which everyone is an idiot. In my canon, they've smartened up and keep them in the library now. It's part of their "Sombra/AVGN Contingency Plan". And they called Spike an idiot when he came up with the name.

hmmmmmmmm make shit pickle and bugs bunny appear

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Did you notice the rating of "Everyone"? I physically cannot write Shit Pickle in. For the same reason, I can't use Motherfucker Mike. I did have plans for another AVGN character to pop in, but I have to change that now. He'll still get mentioned, and I'll write a joke about it.

THIS IS THE GREATEST FIC SINCE THE SPIDERSES. I EXPECT THE NEXT CHAPTER TO MAKE EVERYTHING BIGGER AND 8.

This was... Beautiful...

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My life would be an empty husk of what might've been, if I never read this. Thank you. Thank you so much.

well was a great short story but still loable

Oh my god! This was brilliant! 10/10, 7/7 asses! That last sentance!:pinkiehappy:

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Take this banal forces of political correctness! Remember Derpy!
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WAIT! WAIT! WAIT! Doesn't Santa Christ use a rocket ship?

How did this story come back into the public eye? I was trying to forget it. It's...better now that it's not my only story with an overall negative rating, but I was still hoping it would just fade.

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