Ever since I can remember, I have been an entity, floating around in the pony world. I didn't know how or why, all I knew was I liked spending time around a certain lavender colored unicorn.
She couldn't see or hear me, all I could do is sense ponies emotions, I sometimes wondered how it would feel to be, "real".
Twilight had strong magic, I knew that. What I didn't know was that it was strong enough to accidentally gift me a solid body. The accident pulled me in the real world, wondering whether it is a gift or a curse, I start to pursue what I had always wanted in my heart, but had never gotten.
A friend...
Or... or did i want... more?...
Chapters (2)
1763569
Okay, not my sort of music but still listenable though :) Kinda like it actually
1763610 Panic! At the Disco is a very good band. Pretty. Odd. was a drastic change from their first album though, which was considerably darker.
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How was the fic btw? :P
1763624 Fairly decent, upvoted.
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First story I have ever written, so thanks :) 1763632
To be honest, i came across this Story twice and the first time as i read the introduction i thought "oh man this is lame... skip..."
But now, the second time i ran into it,... even if i thought nearly the same... i decided... "well give it a try... out there are many people with seems to have studied intensively a book called 'how to make my stories sound to be boring in the Story introduction 101'..." and yes... i was right...
The story is much better than the introduction let you guess.
*thump up + fave*
Is there more where it comes from?
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Wow! thanks dude, I didnt realise it sounded so boring though.
If you have any tips to make the introduction better, please tell me!
And yes, im writing more of this, but I just dont have that much time at hand, so one chapter a week should be maximum untill the holidays
Why is there a human tag?
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Im really really sorry
I use ponify on my pc, so it changed human into pony...
Fixed it
1809893 hmpf... how about
hmpf... hmpf... don't know...
hmpf... my first time that i tried to use my literary voice in English... not as good as i would start now writing in English but still tolerable enough...
maybe one or two more month and my English literary voice can be at least slightly compared to my native language literary Voice...
1811063
Wow!!
Let me see if I can implement it in my intro, it might become awesomecake!
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always happy to help ^^
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I changed it, implementing some of your stuff. I tried to make it a bit less vague and mystical, because in the story I dont really go for that.
What do you think? feel free to give me more hints :)
1815419 yeah ^^ thats good, still mystical but not to mystical ^^
What do you think about that?
1815712
awesome!!