im just trying to find a place were people will read my fanfics
Aliens land in Equstria! Apple bloom goes into there ship for answers, but will she come out? will these aliens friend the ponys of Equstria, or will they destroy them? What will become of the Equstia we all know? When the ponys and aliens have to talk things out, or fight there way though? more aliens are on there way. What will the Princess do about this?
there will not be a lot of sad stuff, but there will be some.
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Thats like saying "buy this kind of food if you like food".
128910 ill have to find a pre reader, yah i slowly get better at this stuff, thanks for telling me about my spelling problem. no one has ever told me about the will we'll thing. thanks
128922 ill fix that
There are plenty of mistakes, but I'll track to see where this goes, and also to see if you can get batter at writing. If not I 'll offer to preread.
Pre reading would be nice, but I'll see if I can make the next few chapters better. If not, I could use a ore reader.
probly heard this before but you Really need a proff reader but this story is intresting and i will continue to read
135460 thanks! yah i need to inprove on my english skills
Dat grammar
142029 im sorry
im trying a fallout story, but im going to have a pre-reader.
I hate to say it, but the spelling and grammar of the story almost completely ruined this story. This needs a lot of work. I'd recommend practicing your writing skills more, before posting another story, with a pre-reader. I'm not saying stop writing, but get some more practice before posting it. I'd recommend writing the story in whole and having the pre-reader go through it with you to point out its mistakes before you post it online.
If anything, at least you're consistent in your errors, so you at least have some idea of what you're doing (ex: Caption is not a rank, Captain is, but at least you were consistent in using caption instead of Captain). Like Clonetrooperkev said, we want to hear the story you have to tell, but right now this is making the read do more work than he/she should and that causes readers to get annoyed and turn away.
i love getting reviews on my writing skills, if i never did, i would never improve. i have made a fallout Equstria story, but i cant find a pre reader to read it; but when i do ill post the story.
So wait, Azul can some how hack through alien technology that he's never seen before?
220082 well i was thinking that a computer is a computer, and maybe they are the same is both worlds
221823 That's a bit of a stretch don't you think? Somehow learning to hack into technology created by an advanced species right off the bat? I mean the humans apparently have the tech to create space worthy vessels and yet they can be hacked by ponies several centuries behind them technologically.
221893 yah your right. i need to think more when wrighting.