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Twilight has a dream which shakes her faith in some very fundamental ideas. She stews in the newfound internal chaos. Can dreams really predict the future? A single portent, with the promise of power, leads her on a chase through the underground world of black magic.

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Chapter 1 · 28th Jan 2012 · 2,483 words
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Chapter 2 · 28th Jan 2012 · 3,523 words
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Chapter 3 · 28th Jan 2012 · 5,197 words
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Chapter 4 · 28th Jan 2012 · 3,735 words
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Chapter 5 · 28th Jan 2012 · 1,732 words
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canterlots #1 · Jan 22nd, 2012 · · · Chapter 5 ·

So did anyone actually read this whole thing? Re-reading it, I think in hindsight that I totally botched the pacing. It jumps around waaay too much without warning. It sure did feel a lot different while writing than what I got from reading it. It's a little disappointing.
I think with my next fic, I am going to make a point to draw out the descriptive stuff and take much more time setting the scene. This one probably should have been like twice as long as it is now.

Anyways, if you did actually read it, please let me know your thoughts. And don't censor them either, I've pretty much mentally already stashed this in the pile of 'failed experiments'.

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