It was the perfect plan. Beyond perfect. Chrysalis had everyone right where she wanted them. But man, she should really watch her mouth.
Yeah, I dunno. This is long overdue, but I thought it was worth posting anyways. One shot.
It was the perfect plan. Beyond perfect. Chrysalis had everyone right where she wanted them. But man, she should really watch her mouth.
Yeah, I dunno. This is long overdue, but I thought it was worth posting anyways. One shot.
This is hooves down, my new favorite story.
1911808
I'm partial to agree!
Loved this.
someone should make a version of this for yugioh rules!
Oh.. I was expecting Rarity to barge in and assault her or something.
Unendlicher Satz, Schande über dich! Rechtschreibprüfung über alles!
1911967 This.
Not bad, but "thine wrath" is doubly bad (don't know the formal terminology, but it should be "thy", and she's talking about her own wrath, so it should be "my"). I was hoping for something like "She's not stopping! Hold her down!" or "We need backup!". Or something.
Wow, just wow. This was the most hilarious thing I have ever read and the most craziest. I loved it! Can't stop snickering to myself.
That was great. Plus, correcting that particular phrase is a pet peeve of mine, so I got major satisfaction from the imagery.
Now, to be the annoying guy that points out errors. (There's something humorous about correcting the grammar of a story with grammar nazis)
The tense disagrees with the rest of the paragraph.
I believe you are missing a "do" here.
The Grammar Nazi forgot his period.
What, there was a fake Chrysalis somewhere?
And though I found it hilarious, the ending only works if spelling is part of grammar. Just wanted to point that out. *hits fast forward to skip long argument on whether spelling counts as grammar*
1911885 That's what I was expecting as well. But I like surprises.
Oh gosh, thank you all so much! I never expected this to be liked!
1912212
Thanks! I was really scared to post this because I wasn't sure I had gotten rid of all the errors. Thanks for correcting them.
As for the last line... that's the joke
well that made me happy.
I was actually expecting someone to hear her singing, but this still ended up being pretty fun. Especially because I can be quite the grammar Nazi.
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1954253How the hell did you get that username?
2294164 On a first come first serve basis, how else?
I thought Rarity beats her up :/