After a series of dark dreams over a period of a week and little sleep, Twilight steps out of her library to find that Ponyville has changed. Everypony is in a foul mood and Twilight can’t figure out why. Does this have anything to do with those dreams of hers, and where did those dark eyes come from. She just can’t seem to get them out of her mind.
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great story so far
thanks it's only my second. I am trying my best at a couple different genres.
just out of curiosity, do you have an editor? this is a good story, but some mistakes are obvious
This was not an easy task for her since this as a relative new spell, and it left her a bit exhausted.
is just one example, and should be "This was not an easy task for her since this is a relatively new spell, and it left her a bit exhausted"
i would be happy to help if you'd like
keep up the good work
I just use word. I have an editor, but he mostly just dose my spelling because I suck with spelling. Thanks though that just must of slipped past me. I'll fix it.