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Sequel to Missing Her
Vinyl's heart was left broken after she learned about the death of her closest friend. So many harsh words were said, and so many unthinkable things were done, and that was the last time Vinyl ever saw Lyra again.

-Vinyl tries to deal with the death of her best friend with the use of drugs, and also tries to fix things that were left without closure with Octavia.
-Octavia puts herself in denial about Lyra, and her heart is shattered from the words that Lyra spoke last to her.
-Bon Bon's heart is in the wrong place, and now that it is too late she realizes the pain she put Lyra through, and she blames herself for her death.
-Colgate remembers all the memories from her childhood with Lyra, and her mind and soul are left in a nostalgic state.
-Rose tries to move on with her life; using forgetfulness as a way to mourn. While Daisy continues to act normally, Lily has locked herself away, never wanting to see the light of day again.
-Berry Punch sees Bon Bon in her time of need, but doesn't know how to comfort her, fearing that Bon Bon is having second thoughts about her choices in the past.

Once again this is a sequel, so for you to understand what is happening I recommend reading my story Missing Her first!

(This fic includes OctivScratch, BerryBon, LyraBon, RoseLily)

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That was beautiful

That was.... damn. I don't even know what to say other than that was beautiful and made me really depressed. Don't feel bad about that though, I sort of hoped it would. You did not disappoint. Good job, and I can't wait to see what else you'll be writing now :pinkiehappy: Keep on keepin' on girl.

2662589 Glad you think so! :twilightsheepish:
2662639 I'm glad it lived up to your expectations! It was quite an ass to complete but I'm glad that it served you a good purpose!

Thank you both for reading and commenting so quickly! I do appreciate it! :heart::rainbowkiss:

Oh look, an update. One I've been looking forward to for a while.:pinkiehappy:
Anyways, this was awesome! Looking forward to your new fanfics!

Is it a salt lake? Or is it the "saltiness" of Lyra's tears?:fluttercry:

That was the most beautiful, sad, and dark story I have ever read. I cried so much. I feel so depressed. Why did you create such an amazing yet sad story? WHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY??!! I just can't stop CRYING!!!!!!!!

2669684 I'm glad it moved you to tears and I'm glad you liked it :twilightsmile::heart:

Yeah, it hit a soft spot just as good. How different everyone deals with loss, really liked the variety.
While you had a Dark tag here, I did not expect that last Vinyl paragraph. That went hard through the ribcage.
For the record, the whole Lyra apparition reminds me of some similar experiences I've had before.
Is there any chance for a sequel-sequel? I'd love to see how you imagine things would go on.:ajsmug:
Could the remainders go back to normal before all went to Tartarus?

A few of my thoughts (some got voiced while reading), that I think deserve mention, in no particular order:
-Warning, spoilers! Continue at your own risk, fellow Readers!-
Well, at least the flower ponies will be good. *Peers towards Lily* I'm watching you!

I swear Vinyl was wishing for a threesome there. Should've banged your bestie sooner, huh? (Yeah, I'm awful... just need to lighten all that darkness! :fluttershyouch:) Also she has Pinkie powers while high. Cool!
No, that's a bad Vinyl, no more Pixie Dust! No! ... *Sigh* Vinyl... :ajsleepy:

So a drunken mistake and you kept going back? And you make it sound like you became Berry's dormat? Oh, Bons... you... candy-flanks... :facehoof:
Berry, you're a... drunkard... (I held back. A lot. :ajbemused:)
Get better Octy, do not compare yourself to Bons though. You weren't cheating on Vinyl.

2828976 I love your analogy of it! It made me smile and giggle a few times there. :pinkiehappy: I don't know if I will be making another sequel, or at least not any time soon. I will have to keep it in mind though. :pinkiesmile:
And I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. It really makes my day! :rainbowkiss:

.-. i hate you

Now I gotta read the sequel, and cry my eyes out like I did with the last (i f*cking hate you for the last ending, jesus christ man, this is like Fallout:Equestria status). You win, okay? YOU WIN THE CRY GAME.

GgggggrrrrrrrRRRRRR!! HOW COULD YOU WRITE THIS. MY EYES AND TEARS. WHY!? -throws table-

F***ing phenomenal

I don't think I've ever cried this hard over a fic and I'm not sure if I ever will I love and hate you at the same time for this...

Guess that's how you know when a fic is good

Even in death there is love, at least for Lyra. When Daisy saw those eyes it made my spine go cold, you are the first to ever do that to me. It just chilled me to my core, as I saw a face looking almost like a skull with those eyes, the features hidden in the darkness so the eyes are what stand out the most, and that is what popped into my head at just reading that line of words.
Death effects everyone diffrently, and eveyone handles it diffrently, Though I think Colgate was hit hardest, to be frozen as she was to feel nothing fromt he shock of her friends suicide and of finding her body, it most likely was too much of a shock for her and she most likely will never get over it.
Now it might have been too long since I read the story before this one so it did not effect me as strongly but still the feelings where there and it did sting at my heart

:pinkiegasp:OMGOSH:pinkiegasp:
you made a sequel to "Missing Her"!?
putting this on my psp to make sure i read it
thank you for writing friend!:twilightblush:

SO MANY THE FEELS!!!!:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

I need to stop reading your stories. All they ever do is put me in a depression. I'm going to beat my punching bag now.
Liked and Faved

+1. One of the few stories that has made me cry.

This is the saddest story of all time

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