A normal day in our favorite pony land "EQUESTRIA." ....... Thats it. It's just a normal day in Equestria. Read it if you want to. I'm not gunna stop you. Go on. It's right there. Just a simple click. You guys know i'm not good at descriptions! It's there though. Just below this description. I'm not gonna stop you. You people are getting really annoying! That's it! Fine! don't click it!.............................
................................................................................................................................... PLEASE CLICK IT! I dare you to! I'll give you a cookie. I'm so alone!
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I deeply loathe these kinds of descriptions.
2118520 LOL did you even read the fic?
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Well don't feel offended that I didnt read it, because it usually takes something special (even from very well written fics) to catch my interest. I simply said the description was not to my liking. Preferably, you could maybe put a brief synopsis of the storyline/ events of your fanfiction instead of the "lel XD so randumb :DDDDDDD!!!111!111"-esque amalgamation of words you have there.
2119483 ......... OK I overreacted. But the first sentence was the storyline/ events of my fanfiction. I just made that crap up as I wen't along. The description is so that you know what your getting into. in this case, It's so you know that i'm just having fun with it. It might not be fer u but don't go bitching about the description. It's the story that you need to bitch about.
I'm going to be more brash than usual.
There is a difference between "Having fun" and being stupid.
FIMFiction is a site meant for serious fanfiction. If you want to publish something silly, go write this and either post it on a silly place like your deviantart or something or just share it among friends, because it's not really welcome here.
Having fun while writing would be like writing a comedy with a silly plotline. Still great writing, but the storyline is silly and original. Your intro right now just makes the story seem like "omg im sooo randum xddd"
It doesn't make me want to read the story. Also, it makes you seem like a VERY young writer (like, 11-14), which implies immaturity, which is no fun.
Fix the description, and fix the story (which I'm assuming based off of your description is absurdly "silly" based on your description). Yay.
Also
#rood
2120154 As I said before. This was my first story I had ever written, I just wanted to get something out there. I had no idea how fanfics work I looked up everything I could but found nothing. And I can post it on this damn site if I want! I it's not welcome here then why was it approved? Also i'm 13 I was 12 when I wrote this. Now i'm going to go play Charlie Brown music and be sad.
WAIT A MINUTE! YOUR TELLING ME I'M STUPID I'LL KILL YOU! I'LL KILL ALL OF YOU! YOUR ALL DOOMED!
Seriously though I'm sorry i'm a bad writer, and I am a very hateful person I never meant to be so bad a this and stupid. This story was only meant to pass time and it was meant for more younger viewers *puts piece of paper down* Sorry.
Btw happy valentine day.