While attending the annual Science and Magic Expo at the Equestrian History Museum, young Peter Parker's life goes through a tremendous, unexpected change. But whether it's for better or for worse is anypony's guess.
While attending the annual Science and Magic Expo at the Equestrian History Museum, young Peter Parker's life goes through a tremendous, unexpected change. But whether it's for better or for worse is anypony's guess.
seems like a good start. gonna watch this one, seeing that spidey's my favorite marvel hero.
not bad at all comander
great start!
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Well thanks, everypony! Certainly a better reaction than I expected!
I'm gonna be doing my best to keep a deadline of posting every tuesday, and I'll try and give each chapter my best shot.
Just wish I knew how to get started after the origin story's done.
umm.....green goblin or something like that?
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.... Maybe.
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
so....is it time for the mane story?
cuz i think twi's gonna end up being the "Mary Jane" of this story.
Let's not jump to any conclusions, now.
But yeah, it's time to get the first mane story started.
love it
If anypony's curious why there's no new chapter today, that's simple.
I did some slight revisions on the first two chapters. Wanted to submit to Equestria Daily, but chapter 1 wasn't nearly long enough. So, I did some tweaking and expanding, and put the number count to where it is now. Needed to do some editing with chapter 2.
5 internets to whoever points out all the changes!
I realize a simple expansion and edit to what's already there isn't much of an update, so here's a humorous image of Pinkie Pie to help make up for it:
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Whoops! Did I say humorous? Haha, I meant horrifying! But rest assured, the next chapter will be up on time!
GREAT JOB! now read my Spider-mane story
loveing it so far
can't wait till next chapter
Y U NO WRITE MORE?!?!?!