Several months have past since Doctor Whooves entered Equestria and found himself unable to leave, he had wondered how the universe he knew was going to get by without him and on the first year anniversary of his appearance he'll get his answer. Now he must make the choice to either stay with his new friends or return to his old ones. Either way this will decide the fate of the new Time Lord chosen to take his place in either universe depending on his choice. Paging Doctor Whooves, The Seeker is here to see you.
A MLP/Doctor Who Crossover with my Original Character designed from the concept of the Doctor Whooves theory. (The amount of main character's listed will fluctuate depending on their importance in the story at the latest chapter published so... I hope that's acceptable.)
MUST.RESIST URGE.TO.ALLONS-Y!!!!
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Oh that's quite alright. Just go ahead and let it out... You'll probably feel better. Probably because being sure means that your in trouble.
I would like to point out that your supposed to make separate paragraphs for each time a different person speaks.
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Ah very good thank you. As I said I'm not that good at this yet and it is only my first story so I'll have to add your advice to the next chapter. Keep a look out for it either tomorrow or the day after.
Oh yes looking for pre-readers and post submission editors if possible and any who do sign up may give ideas for future stories and characters for them. If you wish to help? Send a message! Got an Idea for my story that you think could make it even better? Write a message! My style is to let the people and events around me influence me in some way which is how this story came to be. I based it off the concept of Doctor Whooves and the fact that if he's in Equestria who's saving all our butts?
Technically, all the letters in TARDIS are capitalized
Im the Doctor, I came from the planet Gallifery, Im 903 years old, and Im the one who will save all of your lives. If you dont have any more questions, ALLON-Y!!!
The Shield is oddly reminiscent of Ragna the bloodedge huh... interesting