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Just here to read, and write, some FanFic. I really enjoy this stuff, so if you ever need an editor I can look it over for you, just hit me up!

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And once again a story of yours makes me cry...
Just par for the course at this point, I suppose.

That freaking word...:fluttercry:

:fluttercry:
I do not know how I feel about this.
It happened so fast, something that is never noticed. The misconception of most people is that "it will never happen to me" or "everything is going to be okay".

but that's almost never the truth.

:fluttershysad::fluttercry::fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::raritycry::raritydespair::raritycry:
My emotions, in a single strip.

2130628 Any similarities are purely coincidental...

2130657 Oh, my bad... Thank you, however.

2130675 Thank you, very much :twilightsmile:

God dammit... :applecry:

Wish my new story got this much attention so quickly :yay:

Turns out if we keep yelling at him to write, he'll churn out stories.
... Don't actually yell at him, kiddies.

:fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::applecry::fluttercry::fluttershyouch::raritycry::fluttershbad::raritydespair:I'm so sorry for your loss Twilight.

2130877 It's not really getting that much attention John, c'mon now. And usually the basis of my writing is my current emotional state, which is usually depicted in my stories one way or another.

This makes fic number 8 I've read today that's hit me right in the heart.

If I may say so, well done fic. Though I must say that, as a community, FiM fiction seems to be seeing a lot of the emotional fics today, and I must say each one has been beautiful. I urge you to see out those ones yourself...I'll be doing so after this.

Season 3 ended today, and season 4 or not, I think everypony feels something magical just ended, for better or worse.:raritycry:

5/5 Tears for you, good sir.

:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

2131981
Hush now, season 4 has already been confirmed, and it's the full 26 episode package. :twilightsmile:

2133112

26 Episodes!?!?!? Ok, that one surprised me, after this season was so short, I feared MLP would go the way of so many other shows I've loved. This eases my mind, though I still don't know how to feel about this season's end yet in light of this.

2131968 I was trying to be funny... hope I didnt offend!

2133411 You didn't offend me man, I understood the whole "Yell at him" thing, I was just letting you in on writing I guess.

Gak

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I feel like this has been done before; nevertheless, this was still done extremely well.

If I can say I know you, that ‘you’re’ is bugging you, and now a smile has come across your face.

I found this line especially powerful, and it felt like your Twilight was perfectly in character. Good job. :twilightsmile:

2133836 That 'error' was something I felt like it needed to be done, with how much Twilight always wants everything right. I'm glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

I'm gonna cry now :3

Beautiful and so eloquent ...

But what is truly remarkable is the power that words hold. In four words, you can come to remember everything you have ever done wrong. We need to talk. In three, joy can flow through your limbs as it purges sadness from your body. I love you . Two words can bring upon the saddest memories life has to offer. I’m sorry. While all of these are powerful in their own ways, there is one that can deconstruct everything you’ve ever know. it can destroy dreams, love, a spirit, and the passion of any pony.

Goodbye.

I am very well acquainted with all of those phrases. My mother still gives me "the eye"(very similar to Fluttershy's Stare, I think)sometimes and says "We need to talk." At which point I really do remember everything I ever did wrong. Lol. (Seriously, she has that affect when she says that!):rainbowlaugh:

The phrase "I love you" is my favourite. I hear it from my family and close friends and say it back to them. It fills you with warmth and joy and makes you smile just to hear it.:twilightsmile:

As for "I'm sorry"....dang. I have said it too many times to count....ahem. Moving on...

"Goodbye". That one is really hard and can be very painful. I had to say goodbye to my uncle four years ago next month, and that goodbye still hurts to this day...though it does ease a little with each year. So...I feel ya, Twi. I really, really do.

I dread the day when I must say a final goodbye to my own mother. And father. I do not look forward to it by any means...:fluttercry:

Hopefully, it will be a long time yet. They are pretty up in years(70s to be exact)but they are still highly active and energetic. Hopefully it stays that way for many more years.


(Ahem. Sorry for the emotional moment...)

The kettle whistle echoed throughout her home, the telltale sign that her water was heated to the perfect temperature. Pouring herself a cup of hot water and letting the tea steep in the mornings was one of her favorite things to do in the mornings, mainly because it reminded Twilight of her mother. It was one of her only real habits she could ever remember, watching that light grey pony pour herself tea in the early morning. It was something that Twilight and her mother often shared together, those early mornings in Canterlot. They would each drink a cup of jasmine tea and just talk. Not about anything specific, but just fun talk with her mother. Nowadays, that was something that she wished she could do, but there was the factor of the distance that they now had between each other. It would have been nice to do drink with her mother, but the aroma of the tea was enough to bring the memories back.

Excellent use of foreshadowing

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