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Elusive Phoenix


If a tire was on fire during a blizzard, would you stay close to it and keep warm, or run from the awful smell?

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Cynogryphon. A near extinct race of two-sided creatures. Hunted by the Gryphons their entire lives, these part eagle, part wolf creatures have fled their homeland. Will they find refuge at the end of their quest? Will the Gryphons assault Equestria just to get the Cynos?
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Preread by Literature and Jade Groove. Big thanks to Jade for being the most demanding editor ever. Seriously, I appreciate it.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 31 )
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May I ask if this was inspired by "The Bounty Catching, Freedom Dreaming, Winged Wolf Phenomenon"?

2192723 No. I found the Cynogryphons looking at Achiyalabopa. I just found out about that fic yesterday.
WHEN IT WAS FEATURED.

2193052 I'mnotsurepleasedon'tkillme!

2193140 I may kill many people for their own reasons, but you are not one of them. Do not worry, WTF cat w/ an eye-patch. You are safe...

2193839 But I'm a fox, with a penchant for drinking booze and firing off explosives. *ears droop*

2193938 It's okay. I know the feeling of people misinterpreting who you are. People still call me Fenix, or Chicken.
I'M A FIREY BIRD, NOT A VIDEO GAME CHARACTER!

Great Story so far!:twilightsmile:

Cool story bro

What's with the deleted comments?

2194453 My prereader didn't realize they would be seeable.
Yeah...

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Dude, tf2 demoman fox much? xD :rainbowlaugh:

2217039 You're the first person to comment on that, I love to play TF2! Everyone else who has commented on my pic says it's Tails, despite him being yellow, and less Okami art-styled.

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Yeah, once upon a time, I owned people at TF2.

Nowadays, I'm not as good. :pinkiesad2:

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Comments that editors put directly on the story are removed to prevent embarrassment from the author for his mistakes being know publicly.
Because Fenix makes a hot... Excuse me, lot of mistakes in his stories.
Don't tell him I said that.
Wait a second...
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It was a joke Fenix I am sorry...

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Shhhh, Fenix. Be calm. Let the hate calmness flow through you.
Do not hate on thee who art an explosion-loving eyepatch-wearing fox.
Hate on those containing lots of flammable material that, when rationed correctly, can burn for hours.
Like trees.
Not books.
Dearest Firehawk, not the books.

2231544 Oh dear God, you know my name. Sheeeeeeeeiiiiiiiiii*.
And I don't hate the adorable fox. He's faqin' adorable!

2234752 I'll still never get over how hilarious it was when I first saw that:rainbowlaugh:.

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Oh, do you play Borderlands 2?
Love that game.

2236888 I played the first one maybe too much, and I still haven't beaten the 2'nd one yet.
It's funny because I played Siren using my SP profile on XBOX, "Firehawk". When I saw her in the second game, I friggin' laughed my balls off.

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Siren is the best class.
Gameplay for her is beast.

Okay, I like this story so far, despite the way that you treat gryphons. I hope that you continue this story!

2349102 Don't worry, a badass Gryphon story was submitted yesterday! (and still hasn't been approved:twilightangry2:)

2349777 Wait, so there's an approval process? How long does it take?

2350197 usually up to 6 hours, but they seem to be slow this week...
Mystic might be the only one approving at the moment...

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