this is a prime example of why i should really get more sleep....
contains a human being Human... pop culture references...
and Dave misquoting Superman.
after all..... Nobody's perfect
a depressed music student with nothing better to do that write stories.
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That was one decent story you have there.
4.5 stars from me, since the start was a bit confusing. Heck, the whole story was a bit confusing, but still enjoyable
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glad ya liked it :D
Nice one here. Thinking about continuing?
If you're wondering, I've only read to chapter three, so I'm just asking.
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Dude, of course im going to continue it :D...
but im concentrating on TMDGB at the moment... which will soon be uploaded here :D
dramatic....i love it
i seem to have found out im insane
i D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW'ed my heart out.....now i must use yours to replace my own
ohmygohohmygodohmygodsweetfinallyihavebeenwaitingforsolongilovethisnowthisisthebestdayofmyhumanlifeYAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY
179490
hmmm i think i moight just upload the first chapter on here, keep DH together
Wuuuuuuuut?
You cant end the chapter here I want moar you know...
191325 im workin on it now gotta love the time skip...
191327
Those emoticions are telling me to prepare for a sad chapter. I hate being so weak ( I can fall into temporary depressions from all these stories.. Cant read sad stories anymore... At least not a lot )
191354 i'd call it bitter sweet myself... espicially this chapter
awwwwww so happy.......and btw do you need any more OC's for this, or any other story you have? cuz i could gladly let you use mine
191533 i could do.... but maybe in the later chapters of the post time skip chapters.
You seriously need a pre-reader. Aside from that and the chapters being a TINY bit short, everything's good.
191633 wut? .... meh, i've gone this long with out a pre-reader... if it aint broke dont fix it
This is.. Kinda sad
I hope Dave won't fall into depression.. I know he somehow got better by speaking with Ditzy, but I don't think he will stay positive for too long
207694 as River Song once said... Spoilers ....ugh i'm such a depressive author arent i
207699
Yup.
(Straight, bold answers ftw )
*yay*
... "Bluey".. Who the hay would name their filly "Bluey"..?
210219 that was the point of it... i wanted a little bit of irony considering the main character was a red-head, and bluey being an unknown slang term for a ginger... plues its Vinyl.. blue mane :P
I see someone is a fan of Teamfourstar
223772 oh hay yeah!
they hurt ANY of the mane 6 i will blast them to fucking ASHES with lightning
NOBODY hurts them
EVEN IF IM IN A DIFFERENT STORY I WILL PROTECT THEM
wait a moment
did you call me a foal?
well then....expect a 20000 volt brohoof next time you get one from me
232007 dude, your not in this story at the moment... the kids full name is Mjolner Thunder Strike... the son of the main character
oooooohhhhhh......well, MY names thunder so what do you THINK I'd think?
232038
.......well i can still give you the voltageshakr....but your cool, and safe........for now
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH
daaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww................and first
173421 insanity has creapt up on me as well
234004
ah...well then.....
-appears behind some random pony and bites into his neck-
tasty.......
-looks up and sees you-
............i was feeding?
-shows vampony teeth then fades in a burst of lightning-
moar please
first ad w00t or revenge
i hold his almighty sword also known as firstfor equestria!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ENDING WAS SHITTY: GOPIGN TO REWRITE IN 5, 4,3,2,1.....
they're the princes of the u-ni-verse!
1398795 funnily enough.... yeah... thats what it was written to :L
1400097Lol highlander
HOLY SHIT ( why is the human not dead ) the fuck celestia damn what he do
i hope celestia is pissed she is MEAN in this story
OH SHIT
gimmi back MY MONKEY SHE SAYS
Nice story.
2480633 heh, thanks, back when I started it was... literally just days after the season one finale
Do moar.
MOOOOOOOOAR!!
I love going to the hospice XD nah but there is a spelling error there
1672439 He existed, Dun Dun Dunnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!