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All these years

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A oneshot that I had in mind concerning Luna's time at the moon. A rather short writing spiced with melancholy.

There might be some grammar mistakes, I will proofread all my fics but there might still be some errors, if so i apologize.

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Black Wolf #1 · Mar 14th, 2013 · · ·

Okay, first of all, I like the plot. It's a decent story, kept vague and ambiguous so that the reader can see through Luna's perspective. The main reason you got downvotes probably stems from either A) it went over their head, or B) they spend too much time worrying about every little grammatical issue. There are a lot of syntax errors peppering this story, and a good editor would probably be helpful. There are groups for that, I believe. I hope to see some more stories soon! Just keep being awesome.