An old writer polishing his ways, giving feedback, and helping fellow authors. Nothing more.
The indomitable will to pursue another. Many find it distasteful. Most find it annoying. Some find it down-right freaky. But to the vex of a very inexperienced Pegasus, certain ponies just don't give a damn.
Rated Teen for suggestive themes. Enjoy!
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ERM I'm a bit.... I have no words for my feelings I may have made a new one. A combo of confusion from the story and pain from the sunburn I have. I have no explanation but just WHAT?!
Excellent! I'm doing my job right, then! All the same, Hope you enjoyed, though I probably should put Comedy or Random in the tags... Eh.
This seems unfinished, and I'm very confused about what's happening in this story.
I'm...what...I have no idea what i just read
. I was confused right away.
I'm not confused. unlike other readers. I really like this. You should continue this, its really cute!
Continie this. Right now.
Continue this right now or be sent to the moon in punishment.
That was fantastic definitely worth the read I demand more like now! This was to good to end here
You aren't going to tell us what the hell just happened are you?
I Have one word
MOAR!!!
wat.
my only critique would be.... what the heck is going on here.
But for some reason I think that's just how you wanted us to feel.
Good job
All I can say is I'm glad this didn't end in rape. As much as I'm a fan of Pinkie one-sidedly liking Rainbow Dash, this irked me quite a bit. That said, I felt these to be valid interpretations of the characters' personalities in this situation. I wouldn't want to read more, but that's more my preference in style and genre (as well as many of the other commentors apparently).
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Yes, this was an experimental fic, one to test the waters, to see what I was dealing with coming into the fandom.
Well, that, and I was in the midst of my improvement crusade months before. The fruits of my labor were borne in my other pieces. I've refined my sentences, lerned when to actually use passive narration, and all but eliminated my 'purple prose'. But, as with all good things, mixed results ensued, as I write for love of the craft, not the ratings.
*sighs contently* Oh yeah... Good times. Thanks for your comment.
Craine...