Part 1: The Princesses are overthrown, the Elements of Harmony are divided, and it's up to a little filly and her friends to put the world back together.
Arcs
Birth of a Hero
The Diamond Dogs
Mirror Child
Part 2: Epona has obtained the Element of Honesty, but the other Elements of Harmony are still hidden across the world. With the nations on guard, her greatest trials are still to come.
As a big fan of Legend of Zelda, I'm going to read this.
And it better be good.
It was... okay. Though I have no sudden urge to track and see where this is going.
2425829 Well, thanks for reading anyways What about it was off-putting?
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I'm not sure. It gave me no urge to keep on reading. Thats all.
2426850 Thanks. I'll work on it to try and fix that.
Not bad, I'm not a big Zelda fan but I think this is going to be a good story
2428093 Thanks for the encouragement
So far the story make little sense for me.
Twilight using a child for guinea pig with an unknow spell ? o_O
Am I the only one to find this disturbing ?
Then we have a HUGE elipse of TWO weeks, Applejack doesn't seems to have talked to Twilight for any explanation and goes directly to Celestia ? o_O
You don't even point if AJ tried to talk to Applebloom about her worries, why not ?
Why starting the chapter with an angry AJ going to talk to Celestia when ( as most of the show morale tell ) she can ask Twilight or Applebloom what the problem is ?
Pretty good. My only problem is that Silver Spoon is an earth pony not a unicorn.
2435959 All valid points. I guess I'm really dropping the ball on the story so far (gotta find some pre-readers for stuff like this ) I can provide an explanation here, or if you'd like I'll put together an intermediate chapter.
2436388 This would also be a valid point, if her mane weren't poofy enough to cover her horn. And if that half-baked theory doesn't work, I shamelessly pull the AU card
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That works haha
2436863 Legit.
LoZ...
You have my attention.
*Immediate Favourite*
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Applebloom has reached level 2
Applebloom has learned the hamerspace ability.
And the 1st dungeon quickly approaches.
2446215 2446460 Thanks!
2446926 Yea, pretty much. I like to think it's based on Twilight's or Courage's magic, but that's basically what it boils down to.
Eh, the DD lair is gonna be more of the kick-start to her adventure than an actual dungeon. There may be a boss, at the the end, though. Who know?
I always loved link crossovers, being a LoZ fan myself. Also, as Apple Bloom being my fave character, this is just too perfect.
Applebloom? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! (<---- Paradox right there :3)
psshaw if she has courage shes basically link and HE'S fought giant monsters, she will be fine
SHH! Don't spoil the surprise!
...dangit.
She can't die, she's the main character.
2464041 Aha, that's not quite true. She can be killed, but it is extremely unlikely. Especially since I haven't found a way to implement bottled fairies.
...yet.
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Bottle fairies = a chapter thats nothing but Apple bloom dying a lot.
groan they gave them the elements courage applebloom............ do something
Go get 'em Apple Bloom! Good work by the way, you have me hooked!
2464543 Possibly, though I doubt it. Even if she could get an unlimited supply, I think she'll find dieing once is plenty enough for her. Of course, that's still contingent on whether or not they can be worked into the story.
2466028 Don't worry, they will.
2466099 Many thanks
Its like ocarina of time.
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And A Link to the Past with the six maidens. It's nice that there aren't many distracting cliches but also that it really holds true to the LoZ fandom. I applaud you for your amazing story!!!
Must.Have. MOOOAAARRRRR!
but srsly, awesome
I am guessing OC's will be required for the new Elements of Harmony bearers? Unless you have Canon ponies in mind. Who knows WHAT will be next so im very excited!
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I think you'll find there will be references to many different Zelda games over the course of the story, as I'm drawing inspiration from just about all of them.
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So much enthusiasm! I'm glad you all are liking the story, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy it as time passes!
As for who the next bearers will be, I'm gonna have-- No, that would involve spoilers. You'll just have to find out when the time comes
has anyone reccomended you for EqD yet? they should.
the claw bits are new. is that an original item?
lemmie guess...Epona is an ancestor of the apples?
oh, and will Ganon do the usual and use everypony?
find out, on the next Legend of Zelda;Hooves of Courage!
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Not that I know of.
They are based on the mole mitts from Minish Cap.
Not exactly...
Ganon probably won't make an appearance. It's possible, but highly unlikely.
2476282 I DEMAND for Navi to be in this! can't have a Link without a Navi that you want to beat the shit out of!
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There have been no plans for a navi-esque character so far. I may bring one in for the comedic value later, but not yet. We'll just have to wait and see how the story goes.
2477091 I have many suggestions but since its 100 years in future every canon pony is dead aside from immortals.
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Aha, that's a good point you bring up. Consider the following: Is it impossible to be immortal without being an Alicorn? Or are there forces out there, good or malign, that can prolong even the most common pony's life?
Just some food for thought.
Wel chances are that circle of villains have prolonged any "non-immortal" lifespan to keep the circle in tact so it's a no brainer the villains remained along with Celestia and Luna. So... gah i sense a bunch of OC ponies coming in, do not disappoint brother! Also im willing to help chip in a few if need be.
Hmm part of me wishes for the four swords so we can have four grownup Applebloom links.
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Funny. I wish for that too. Unfortunately, it's far too early in the story for even the master sword, much less the four sword.
2478990 hmm your probably right, still I think you should implement that sword in the story. Just a suggestion though. I'm sure you have it planned out.
Oohoohoohoo now Applebloom can become a true hero without restraint. Or how she can easily be guided by an outside influence. Nice.
I really hate cliff hangers
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Is that an "I wish the next part of the story was out already" type hate, or an "I wish cliff hangers were wiped off the face of the planet" type hate?
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the first kind
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Cool. I'll take that as a compliment, then
how does applejack NOT recognize applebloom i mean epona
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She can't see very well.
2496376 good point