Everypony has secrets, some bigger than others. A secret about scootaloo and her troubles may be found out but another pony's may shock you.
(I am only 14, so dont dislike and critisise just because i may have bad grammar. (i'm failing engligh, haha how randoms that?!) this story basically goes through the challenges some people may face in real life.)
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Definitely need to work on grammar, but overall an excellent effort and nice read. Good job. :)
excellent work
Yay!
Another brony with a Scootaloo
story that is 14 and has bad grammar!!! Iz love your story!!!!!!!!!!!
Is too much of a conicidence that my story is similiar to yours? Like this section;
That was from your story.
And that was from mine.
Round about the same.
My story is 'How Close You Are To Me'
Please tell me if you have read it before.
Give ya an 'A' for effort, but could use a little more detail. Story seemed to jump around some, and lack details when needed.
Not bad for your first story. I can tell you that considering how well you did with 10 likes and zero dislikes that is something to be proud of. I only have one issue, ever heard of a story called How Close You Are to Me? It seemed to reflect that almost too well. Otherwise not to bad.
It's a good story but um... I don't think you understand how babies work... As in, it's very, very unlikely that anyone would get pregnant at the age of 8... I mean it happens but... yeah...
Anyway, it was a really good story and I enjoyed it,
That. Was. AMAZING!!!! I love it and not bad for your first story!
2437071 no, i know how they work, but if i made RD a sutible age, then scootaloo would seem too young than she actally is. and if you actually think about it, they ARE ponies after all so its possible for them to get pregnant at like, 1 or something?
2424774 im so sorry, i havent read your story and i was kinda weirded out that it was pretty much the same at that point. now i feel really bad... will i get into trouble by the people who run the website now? .................... if it makes you feel better, i could take it off the web.
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it's just a coincidence.
Aww it's okay. It's no biggie. Your story is brilliant!
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I mean come on! You have no dislikes!! Mine has loads!
Your story is in my favourites because it is that brilliant.
2454936 out of curiosity i just read yours and i reckon its great!
Fluttershy says yay!
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I'm working on the sequel, How close you both are to me. You see that as well. 
Aww thanks.
2455099 how close you both are to me? it would be intresting to find out what that means, is another pony involved? cant wait!
2454886 Oh right, well I've heard that the Mane Six are probably all in their 20's or something, so maybe you could have boosted the age you gave Rainbow?
I'm not complaining or anything, and I'm not asking you to change it, I was just curious as to why you decided to make it the way it is! Sorry if I offended you or something
It's a really good story! 
2455282 idk, i feel that rainbow, AJ, fluttershy and Rarity are all 17, Pinkie pie, 16, and Twilight ,18. (But that's just my opinion
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2501971 I always felt that they were younger too! But I was told that they were in their 20's and was quite disappointed
its kinda.... bland.
and sappy.
2501971 This story also resembles Gutterloo, except with a happy ending. Still a good story.
3928546 you think? Ive read gutterloo, its good
but if you mean by the homeless/orphan part is similar, then yeah, I like to think of her that way, idk why
Okay... I know you said not to criticize your grammar, but I'm 12 and I have better grammar.
Just go to YouTube and look up Word Crimes. Quite funny,and helps with grammar.