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When Valentine and Cerebella get sent to Equestria, the Skullheart is free to run rampant across the docile country? Who will the Skullheart choose to possess. How will the two fighters confront this peaceful land of pastel colored ponies?

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eh, it's not a bad start, though the pacing needs a check and the characterization of the characters we don't know it's not quite good, but hey at least it's a bit more original than most HiE fic that have both princesses starring, although I hate princess Twilight Sparkle with all my heart, it's not that bad of a first chapter.

2432961 they will be getting more characterization next chapter. In hindsight i probably should have made the two chapters into one

Oni

2432985 how did you beat me to this?
oh, and unrelated sad pokemon pic.
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This better be good, cause I'm a big skullgirls fan and am getting my OC (not current but new) going to be put in the background from their indiegogo campaign drive.

2433036 i'm planning on it. I hope i can live up to expectations
2433014 because im awesome, though the story needs more likes

i will read this all the time
check ever day for ever till it done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oni

2433074 what do you think of the pic?

you're information is incorrect because on the official skullgirls website it says that Valentine is 27 and that Cerebella is 18, which means they could not have been childhood friends, pro-tip for the future you should get the facts strait on characters before you pull the "childhood friends" card

2617557 sorry never read that. my bad. oh well. my story, my rules. artistic license and all that shit. I think I might be coming off as a little rude. sorry bro. check back when im sober

2432961 so we should keep you away from the skullheart?

2617894 hey! Only one person gets away with that...well damn she's dead.....well one pon-wait that freak can do that to ok you know what just tell me if there's a group for this or not please.....i will throw in a cute zombie!?!

what happen next chapter?

The two fighters lay, unmoving on a stone floor, a hole in the ceiling, high above, from where they crashed through. The one on the left had blood running down her arm. She wore a lab coat that came down to her mid-thigh and nothing more. She had a bandage over her left eye. While she slept, something was pulsing in her chest. Suddenly, the breast of the coat burst open and out came a heart shaped skull, wreathed in blue flames. The Skullheart looked down upon the unconscious form of his former host. It seems I am free and in a new land. I am sorry, Valentine. It was fun while it lasted, but I will spread my chaos all across this new land. With that, the skull heart flew off into the night in search of a new host.

Good luck with that discord would take care of you very easily.

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