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Thank you I admit I like to run around the site and give feedback on short, overlooked stories.

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Thanks! I certainly learned something new about critique just by reading that comment! super awesome of you, keep it up ^^

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Ah, I see, thank you for your honesty. Well, I don’t think I have the time to read your whole story, even though it’s moderately short, but I’ve it bookmarked and will go through the first chapter or two and let you know what I think. In my experience, the first thousand words or so tend to reveal a majority of the story’s issues.

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I saw you commented on my friend Flora Blossom's story Clown Mare. Your critique was so thorough, a lot of it was the advice I was trying to give her but was unable to articulate well due to not being able to find the words or lack of general experience. Especially since I'd love for any similar constructive feedback with Manehattan Vice. I've poured a lot of love into it and have taken constructive criticism as well as I can. It's okay if you don't want to read it for being a mature story (Only because I didn't want to pull any punches on it as it's got a lot of touchy subjects in it.)

Hi there, thank you for the watch! May I ask what brought you to click that little button?