I'm going to say, screw looking for an editor. These are my stories, and I write the way I write. I'll look over these stories myself before trying to find an editor. I've tried millions of times to find one, and no luck. I'm taking matters into my own hands. People are welcomed to leave reviews on improvement ideas, but that will be it.

DarthRedbeard here.

I'm going to be doing a complete rewrite of this story. The story itself will remain up, but the chapters will be coming down to be worked on. Until further notice, this story will be under the incomplete category. The revised version will have more chapters and Chapter two will be a whole other story.