Hello Kekkres, I am just posting this here comment in order to say thanks for adding me to your watch list.

192727 Alrighty. Well, I'm going to head off for the night now, seeing as my eyes are currently burning, but I'll drop you a message tomorrow. Well, later today.

Thanks for the fav

192718 im willing to accept advice but it was made clear that my fic needed some work so i pulled it to fix up before i embarress myself further

Look buddy, I'm willing to explain to you why your first attempt failed. If you're willing to accept the advice, let me know.