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Lingering Void


Plagiarism is necessary. Progress implies it. Take what you want from anything I've created, if you somehow find something you like. I will take from yours. I welcome any and all criticism.

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Later chapter titles will contain spoilers.

Unable to bring themselves to turn him into the authorities, Rarity and Shining Armor secretly take in and care for a human with some serious medical conditions. It would be more accurate to say they follow necessity than it would be to say they figure out what to do.

Ponies find out who shouldn't, think how they don't usually, but react as they must. Various scenarios we have all seen before, but with a few nuances which might just unravel everything.

AKA: An idiot who's never written any story before ever attempts a deconstruction of various HiE plots and the usual treatment of the FiM universe

All input, ranging everywhere from criticism to ideas for plot developments to alternative names for characters, is always welcome. In this story especially, input regarding my depiction of various medical conditions is wanted. I neither have myself nor know anyone personally with the main conditions I currently have in mind, so corrections regarding my treatment of them will probably be necessary.

I don't have any idea what categories this story should go in, so if someone who is OK with spoilers would like to hear my general idea of where this is going, and/or see unpublished chapters in the future, then please PM me.

I only have a general idea of where this is going, and ideas for various chapter details (now in the form of essentially glorified vignettes), whether or not I fully flesh out my ideas and start working on a plot outline, will depend on how this is received.

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