Sorry about the long wait but I have been busy with work and life, but now that everyone is stuck in quarantine including me I will start posting chapters.
It is better to be kind in a world full of hate, then join that hate and become part of the problem. Simply be kind and better.
In a distant Island far-flung from any major continent and far from prying eyes. A city is shown on the large island lit by lights to shine through the darkness of night. Closer still is a forest to the left of this great city, and in it, a faint light is shown. Closer to the light one goes finds a group of people one who is old and six who are young. One of the kids who is sitting on a log next to the campfire asks this old man. ”Sir, may I ask you for the origins of this great country and
I have to say this now and should have said it sooner I am sorry for being toxic deleteing comments that had criticism in them. Overall I have been a terrible author, writer, and person and for that I am sorry. So I have come back to apologize and to start anew. As in I am going to do the best I can on the chapters I make and story’s I make. That is not all I will try no I will treat everyone’s comments with respect and try and learn from the criticism of others the best I can. With that this
So overall I have a problem with the fact that the longer I go with a chapter the more mistakes and overall progress of the story makes no sense. Though the shorter I go with a chapter the less amount of mistakes. I make a chapter that let’s just say 1,500 words long I can catch on to those mistakes because my brain is not fully drained from when I make a 2,000-word long chapter. So what do you guys want shorter chapters but have more logic behind them or a 2,000-word chapter that seems rushed?
Okay, so I feel like I need to put some background info for the setting of my story the Creators Tale because I made the mistake of not fully or at all explaining the setting of the story. So, the story does take place in Equestria, but an alternate world of Equestria. Think that Equestria has just been through World War One and has the technology of that time period so the ponies have guns, artillery, warships, early tanks, and planes. Also, the main six have served in the new Equestrian Army
I will not delete comments anymore I only did so because I was rash a could not take the criticism which was stupid and immature of me to do so.
Though I will delete a comment if:
1. It is rude a disrespectful to the author, not the story
2. If it is insulting to another person or persons.
3. If it immature in the sexual sense
4. If it is trying to bring down the author or make him feel like crap
5. Overall don't be a dick