Hello, Hello? · 11:12pm Oct 2nd, 2015
Hello?
I plan to rewrite the first chapter before continuing. Most of it is quite contrived, and the scene where they get thrown out of the universe was incredibly rushed.
Don't worry, I will still have the wacky, slightly insane humor, but at the behest of my editor/prereader LateBronyWriter I am rewriting the first chapter into near-coherency.
Now go take your meds.