Applejack tries Applejacks. How does she like them? Read to find out!
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A good story. Just needs a little polish. Maybe vary your sentence structure a bit, it seems a bit... jerky.
I've never read anything like this before. Is there a name for this style of writing?
The story begins normal enough, but takes a turn towards crazy. The amount of detail describing each scene tappers, similar to one of those slippery slope kids stories.
By the end I found myself laughing from sheer inanity of the events. Nicely Done
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Thanks for the feedback!
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Thanks!![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
3336675 best...story... EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
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Thank you!![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
3365232 no problem!!![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
Random fanfiction, but great.
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Thanks!![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
3536448 You are welcome.
![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Congratulations! This story has officially been deemed an Emerald by The Gem Hunters.
Slow down a bit, and you could have another Sapphire to add to your list.
I see a sequel in te future called "Big Mac eats a Big Mac"
Yo, dawg. I heard you like Applejack...![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
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Actually, I like Twilight the best.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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A Gem Hunter's Emerald
Awesome.
Is it only me that finds it a bit unsettling that Applejack is named after an ALCOHOLIC DRINK and thus a breakfast cereal for kids is named for an alcoholic drink?![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
Interesting, for sure...
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She'll GET YA DRUUUUUUUUNK!
Have you check out this one: Part of a Balance Breakfast