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Rainbow Dash has been tormenting Twilight to download the newest game on Vapor, EquestriaSide 2. Twilight gives in and decides to play it overnight. Problem it is, that she gets a bit too much into the game.
Yes, this is humanized. Vapor is the equestrian equivalent of Steam. This is an obvious crossover with PlanetSide 2, if not a big shout for any brony players. I'm taking any kind of reception.
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YES! OMG YES!
4323323 I assume that you play PlanetSide 2...
4323332 All the time. I've only had the game for a few months and have put more than 200 hours into it... I guess thats the biggest reason chapter releases have slowed on my fan fics
4323347 Well, I do play. Add me on Steam if you want a fellow brony playing with ya. Look up for xSteelxPaladinx.
4323369 Will do. I use Nvidia to play though. Runs a bit smoother
Proud NC right here on Connery.
4323369 Nor do I seem to be able to find you on steam
Terran, Vanu or NC?
4323417 NC. Proud and loud. I assume that you're Terran?
Are NC democrats?
4323465 Fool. You fight in the name of 'freedom', a freedom dictated to you by corporations and executives that seek only profit. Profit is the downfall of humanity.
Enlightenment is the only way forward. Join us, leave the past behind - We Are Tommorow.
The Vanu Sovereignty's success is the next great step in human evolution. Do not fall on the wrong side of history.
. . . excellent story by the way. Do you play on Waterson, by any chance?
4324265 Meh. You and your ridiculous religion. You were brainwashed by this crazy alien race. Shout as loud as you can about human evolution. Our guns are louder
On the other side, I do play at Waterson. I'm just experiencing some internet problems at the moment, but when I'm good, be sure to meet me at the battlefield. Name's SteelxPaladin there.
4323465
Yup. Space commies for the win.
4323465 For the NC!
4324302 Wow, I play on Waterson! Which outfit do you roll with?
4328439 None at the moment. But I could join one.
4328446 Well, I would ask you to join the outfit I roll with, but I don't like forcing people to join our outfit. Mind if I add you as a friend when my Planetside gets fixed?
ALL HAIL THE NC!
4328497 Go and do it. Name's SteelxPaladin there. Also, I'm experiencing some internet issues, but I'll be online as soon as I can.
4441793 Thank you. Didn't know I was superb
Well, I guess it's time to grab some snow shoes and taun-tauns. SPACE 'MURICA STYLE!
4447031 Hehe. That was kinda cool, even though I don't support the mindset that the NC is in fact the futuristic USA
Ok, reading this hole story is awesome, also, I was wondering if I can have my OCs in this story? I am working on a planetside 2 crossover story for them as well, but I was hoping it could be in conjunction with this one, seeing how awesome it is. Also, my about one of my OCs that goes by his codename, Cap>Spitfire in command and kicking ass, or only kicking ass if Spitfire in this cannon is incharge of THE WHOL NC.
4450695 Okay, you can have your OC. Just shoot me a PM. And yes, Spitfire is in command of the whole NC around in this story
I like the chapter, but I only have one problem;
I'm never that serious for so long. I read the way you introduced me and I didn't feel like I was reading a chapter with my OC. I mean, dude, it's your story. Do what you want with it. But can you just please maybe give my OC some humor in this chapter?
Thanks.
4546481 I can try to add some. I ain't that good with humor, you know. I'm going to wait till my editor finishes his job, firstly. But, remember that you can give me suggestions on PMs.
Ever thought about adding some legit outfits from Emerald by any chance with ponified names?
Examples: PHX, PXP, PotP, Longbow Brigade (Or is it Battalion?), ODMN, TRAF, SubG, VDRS, SGK, RPG, 382nd, Zaps, etc.
4612843 I've fought alongside the PHX and the Longbow Battalion/Brigade. I may take this idea into account, soldier!
Can I has O.C. pweese? Pwetty Pweese?31.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m24v6p2vl31r3k1m8o1_500.png
Also, great chapter! But one this that rubs me wrong in some cases. You see, in that terminal sequence, it insinuated that Twilight was a level forty-five, a Deputy I believe. But she has only started her never ending fight for freedom....... hacks?
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Also, on an unrelated note: I OUTRANK TWILIGHT!
(Uh, of, this can only end in one way)
O.C. name:
Flash SentryLightning Blaze, Class: Light Assault, and possible Irish or European voice? (Just because I respect them.)Also, if Twilight is indeed a BR 45, I would expect her to use a better rifle, just not the Railjack, because that would be too op. More like an SAS-R.
And any chance of Hossin, cont. lock, and outfit stuff making it's way into the FPPS story? (First Person Pony Shooter)
But in any case, I give this chapter a eleven out of ten spike 'staches.
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And 4 out of 3.9999999999 Trollestia's
4639054 My dear freedom fighter: Of course you can put an OC to the story. Just give me his/her info through the PMs.
And... why would Twilight be BR 45? I don't understand. Give some explanation, please.
About Hossin... well, the endgame chapter would be in Indar, but with this pesky continent, I might make some bonus chapters
*reads and relizes something* SHIT I FORGOT! Oh well... I think I need to get the story for the characters, and of course I need to PM you the Characters' bios. I should have them ready soon.
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Just sayin' , kinda threw me off.
Also, happy fourth!
MERIKA!
4642510 Hehe, dude, that's just her username
4642779 Woops
It's just that your story really made it look, well, real.
And that is why I love it.
Also, quick question, are there gonna be any be any outfit references on the Bio battle, or possibly. The deserts of Indar?!
4643323 Relax, it's okay
And that's my goal, to make games realistic on my stories
About those... well, I still need to think. Want to send me an OC to make an appearance? Send me a PM
4640216 Don't worry dude: Just send it before I start writing next chapter
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4965550 Apologies for the late reply. Sadly, I'm quite busy with other projects now. I'll get to this as fast as I can.
4621609 If you bring in PHX's leader: Blackweb into account, just think: Badass Marine with great experience. I have personally served with him and he alone is a force to be reckoned with. And if you SNAFU on him one time, he will go of like a firecracker in your face. Only one abbreviation can describe PHx's officers: SAF (Scary As Fuck.)
Good story but the one thing that confuses me is how easily the Republican tanks where wrecked while loading screen for PS2 says that the tanks are very hard to destroy
5486006 I decided to stick with realism, even if it wasn't properly applied as you are noting. Also, this is an old story, and I haven't worked on it for, say, months. What could explain it, even if I didn't write that down in the story, is the possible beat up they may have received from New Conglomerate anti-tank troops. Thanks for noting that out.