Derpy really likes going to school, she gets to make all sorts of new friends! she makes a special one too.
(This is a story written for a friend, a surprise, and it's written like a Story. they mentioned, so that's why it's written like it is. You can still feel free to dislike and lecture me about proper writing and grammar, though.)
This is really cute, I found it a bit hard to understand in parts though. Was Glowy actually a colt who wanted to dress like a filly? Or did her parents just wish they'd had a boy and didn't like her because she was a girl?
I think it's the first one, but I just think that needs to be clearer. I actually like how it's written because it sounds like it's coming from Derpy's perspective.
So yeah, overall I liked it. Really sweet
4467267 correct, it's the first one. Thanks a lot for the feedback, and I'm glad you like it!~ c: